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Court Cases[edit]

In early 2023, 6 Federal Court Cases were filed against the ICOC alleging child molestation, racketeering and other horrendous claims. In July of 2023 the 6 plaintiffs all withdrew their cases and the judge dismissed ALL the cases. This comes from a Reliable Source found at www.pacermonitor.com (which is a site that keeps dockets of court cases in the US). On the ICOC page an editor has referenced that 2 cases have been refiled, based on a Rolling Stone Magazine article. A simple search reveals that no such LA County Court Cases have actually been logged. If anyone has a primary source that proves the secondary source (Rolling Stone Magazine) is accurate please provide it? JamieBrown2011 (talk) 09:07, 6 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The Rolling Stone article is quite clear in its assertion that cases have been filed: "According to two lawsuits filed July 13 in L.A. County Court, the International Churches of Christ (ICOC) is not a church, but a 'cult,' a high-control group where leaders allegedly take advantage of the members". Cordless Larry (talk) 09:22, 6 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I've reverted this addition based on primary sources. I think we need secondary sources covering these recent court filings to be able to note them, but others may take a different view, so I'm raising it here. Cordless Larry (talk) 20:48, 30 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I am surprised that court cases that haven't even had a ruling are even on this Wikipedia page, this comes across like a gossip magazine more than an encyclopedia. Either WP:BALASPS or WP:BLPGROUP seem to apply. Once there is a ruling then that can be included on this page. Until then the basic rule of NPOV or "innocent until proven guilty" should apply. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 07:10, 31 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
If they've been reported in reliable, secondary sources and the text is neutral, I don't see the problem. Reporting on an ongoing case isn't the same as making an assumption about guilt. Cordless Larry (talk) 08:47, 2 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Here is the primary info on the four state cases pending in Los Angeles against ICC, ICOC and Kippers. Someone keeps removing this info from the article. But these are official, public records.
"As of October 26, 2023, four lawsuits with a total of 16 plaintiffs have been filed in Los Angeles County Court, alleging sexual abuse of children by church leaders and members [Cases Nos. 23STCV16423, 23STCV16430, 23STCV18426 and 23STCV24432]."
Here is the court's website, where these cases can be looked up by the case number [no need to enter any "filing courthouse].:https://www.lacourt.org/casesummary/ui/index.aspx?casetype=civil
Here is the actual fourth complaint.:https://drive.google.com/file/d/174tr_QdQqqNPvJ9gdaYXwg-UOJp1S_Aw/view thought1 (talk) 00:18, 11 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The someone is me, 1pameroo, as should be clear from my comment from 30 October above and comments at User talk:1pameroo#October 2023. Cordless Larry (talk) 20:04, 11 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
All four court complaints can currently be read here. https://icoc-icclawsuits.com/ Kip has appeared in all 4 cases. thought1 (talk) 02:40, 27 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reliability and independence of sources[edit]

I've started a discussion at Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard#Reliability and independence of sources for International Churches of Christ about some of the sources used in this article. Cordless Larry (talk) 18:35, 6 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

NPOV: Adding summary comment to the lead[edit]

To follow the WP:NPOV, since this material appears in the article also, this comment can be added to the summary of the cult discussion in the Lead. "Others have found the church to not be a cult." Cite: https://eresources.nlb.gov.sg/newspapers/digitised/article/straitstimes19980901-1.2.31.11?qt=church,%20not,%20a,%20cult&q=church%20not%20a%20cult

Editaddict (talk) 17:05, 30 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Since no one discussed this and since it is complicit with the WP:NPOV policy, I will add it to the article. Editaddict (talk) 20:56, 4 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Neutrality and verifiability[edit]
Most problems with negative material can be avoided by adhering to standard WP policies, such as using good sources, balancing the content carefully, and writing in an unbiased way. When including negative material in an article, some things to check for include:
•    Ensure that the material is supported by reliable sources
•    Do not present the material in a way that over-emphasizes it
•     Always present positive viewpoints along with any negative information to give balance
Editaddict (talk) 20:59, 4 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You have NO consensus for your edits, I strongly suggest you revert yourself. Theroadislong (talk) 21:09, 4 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Please explain how my simple suggestion does not follow the WP:NPOV policy to create neutrality and balance. My understanding is that the WP policy is what we follow and not just people's opinions. Editaddict (talk) 15:06, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
As has been explained to you, your conflict of interest means you should avoid editing the article directly and instead post edit requests here and gain consensus for any proposed changes. I oppose this addition because the source doesn't really support the claim that "Others have found the church to not be a cult"; all it says is that the Court of Appeal in Singapore overturned a High Court ruling that newspapers that had called the Central Christian Church a cult had not defamed it. We should perhaps add something to that effect to the Court cases and lawsuits section of the article, but the statement you've added isn't supported and doesn't belong in the lede. Cordless Larry (talk) 08:08, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Also, the article doesn't establish that the Central Christian Church was affiliated with the International Churches of Christ, so that would need to be established with a good source. Cordless Larry (talk) 10:20, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It is on their website https://centralchristianchurch.sg/
Is that a good enough source? JamieBrown2011 (talk) 11:52, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
As far as I can see, the website doesn't state that the church was affiliated with the International Churches of Christ at the time of the court case in 1998. Cordless Larry (talk) 15:22, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Perhaps you misread. The headline reads: "The Appeals Court has ruled that the two newspapers defamed the Central Christian Church by labelling it a 'cult." Please give a good reason this addition to the lead does not follow the WP:NPOV "Always present positive viewpoints along with any negative information to give balance." Just saying it does not belong there does not make it so. Editaddict (talk) 15:15, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Wikipedia:NPOV#Balance does not say that, it says "Neutrality assigns weight to viewpoints in proportion to their prominence in reliable sources. However, when reputable sources contradict one another and are relatively equal in prominence, describe both points of view and work for balance. This involves describing the opposing views clearly, drawing on secondary or tertiary sources that describe the disagreement from a disinterested viewpoint." which is a very different statement Horse Eye's Back (talk) 11:30, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
So there are accusations or the church being a cult, then there are articles where the churches of Christ, the 1,6million member body from where the ICOC came, where the representatives of the COC apologized for using the word “cult” to describe the ICOC https://christianchronicle.org/icoc-mainline-leaders-meet-at-abilene-christian-1/ And there is a law case where an expert testified: “Church not a cult, says expert witness Tan Ooi Boon Central Christian Church hearings By Testifies that its practices were not 'strange, unnatural or harmful' AN EXPERT on religious studies yesterday said that the Central Christian Church here was not a cult because Us practices were "neither strange, unnatural or …” https://web.archive.org/web/20130928102343/http:/newspapers.nl.sg/Digitised/SearchResults.aspx?keyword=central%20christian%20church%20hearings. And @CordlessLarry you believe the only Reliable sources are the ones accusing the church of being a “cult”? Tell me you are not serious? JamieBrown2011 (talk) 12:42, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It's not about believing or not believing the sources; it's about accurately reporting what they say. Cordless Larry (talk) 15:22, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
So why are you excluding these sources and what they are saying from your editing in the LEAD and elsewhere? JamieBrown2011 (talk) 16:35, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The lede should summarise the main content of the article, so the material shouldn't simply be added there when it's not in the article. I don't oppose its inclusion in the body article. Cordless Larry (talk) 16:41, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It was already in the body of the article, unless you removed it over the past 6 months.
If no-one objects, I am going to remove the contested section and we can replace it once we have consensus here on the Talk page JamieBrown2011 (talk) 17:23, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The information is already in the article. It is how I found it. You have yet to answer the question "How is including it in the lead summary not following the WP:POV? Your opinions are not the bar for inclusion. Editaddict (talk) 17:02, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
My apologies - there are a couple of sentences on it. A single defamation case in Singapore (and we still don't have a source stating that the church was part of ICOC) doesn't merit inclusion in the lede to my mind. Per WP:LEDE, the lede "is an introduction to an article and a summary of its most important contents". This isn't particularly important content. There's also the problem that "Others have found the church to not be a cult" isn't really supported by the source - it's original research to make that claim based on a single primary source. Cordless Larry (talk) 17:47, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This explanation is very confusing. Perhaps it is because you misread and misremembered the article twice now. How does including this statement and reference to the Singapore case and the cult expert not fit this WP policy: "Neutrality assigns weight to viewpoints in proportion to their prominence in reliable sources. However, when reputable sources contradict one another and are relatively equal in prominence, describe both points of view and work for balance. This involves describing the opposing views clearly, drawing on secondary or tertiary sources that describe the disagreement from a disinterested viewpoint." Editaddict (talk) 21:50, 9 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Do you mean I've misread the source or the Wikipedia article? I made a mistake in stating that the material wasn't covered in the body of the article, but I don't see where I've misrepresented the source. Cordless Larry (talk) 20:46, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you. Yes, what you are stating is the WP:NPOV principle I am trying to follow to achieve a neutral point of view by presenting balance. It is simply a small addition that summarizes content that is already in the article and refers to a reputable disinterested source. Please show how this addition violates this principle. Editaddict (talk) 15:04, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
On the “original research” point @[[User:Cordless Larry|Cordless Larry] is making, he is right. On the RS and NPOV issue, @Editaddict you raise a valid point, why is the Singapore court case which is written about in the Strait Times (a Singapore newspaper) being ignored? JamieBrown2011 (talk) 07:50, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It's not being ignored - it gets two sentences at the start of the court cases section. I'm happy to discuss whether that's the appropriate weight to give the case (I think it probably is), but first you need to demonstrate that with secondary sources that the Singapore church involved in the case is indeed "a part of the ICOC family of churches", with suitable secondary sources. Cordless Larry (talk) 08:31, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
So firstly it is on their own website that they are an ICOC church (I have given the reference above already). 2ndly in the ICOCHistory website the court case and the results are covered in detail https://icochistory.org/download/la-story-courage-under-fire/?wpdmdl=754&refresh=659b9831268ab1704695857 JamieBrown2011 (talk) 15:19, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Their website is a primary source and it doesn't establish that they were an ICOC church at the time of the court cases. The PDF you just linked is also a primary source (written by the ICOC's General Counsel); it does at least establish the connection, but it would be better to have a secondary source. I'm going to open an RfC on this. Cordless Larry (talk) 15:26, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
3rdly, the court case is discussed in the Singapore newspaper “The Strait Times” https://web.archive.org/web/20130928102343/http:/newspapers.nl.sg/Digitised/SearchResults.aspx?keyword=central%20christian%20church%20hearings JamieBrown2011 (talk) 15:44, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Those would be better sources, but do they mention ICOC? Cordless Larry (talk) 16:11, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Cordless Larry (talk) The paragraph in question in the Lead appears to fail Wikipedia Policies in a number of key aspects. For the following reasons, the paragraph should be removed in its entirety or moved to be merged with the Court Cases and Lawsuits section of the article. According to WP:LEAD, "[T]he lead . . .should . . . establish context, explain why the topic is notable, and summarize the most important points, including any prominent controversies" (from a neutral point of view). The context and notability of allegations of the church as a cult have not been established by referencing the "Former members" through a mere citation to a Rolling Stone article or the "view" of Janja Lalich, an individual identified as an expert on cults and coercion, who states that the church has "some of the hallmarks of a cult." The relative number of former members who are making cult allegations to the current members, former members or those from the general population who are not is not ascertainable by these general statements of opinion and do not "establish context" or “explain why the topic is notable” for the allegations that the church is a cult. To position in the Lead the viewpoint of what appears to be a minority is inconsistent with WP:UNDUE that states, "[g]enerally, the views of tiny minorities should not be included at all, except perhaps in a 'see also' to an article about those specific views." --Meta Voyager (talk) 19:46, 21 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

If you read WP:UNDUE, you'll notice that it starts "Neutrality requires that mainspace articles and pages fairly represent all significant viewpoints that have been published by reliable sources, in proportion to the prominence of each viewpoint in those sources" - which is different to being in proportion to the number of former members making the allegations, as you seem to be suggesting. Cordless Larry (talk) 20:18, 21 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
According to WP:UNDUE, "[U]ndue weight can be given in several ways, including but not limited to . . . prominence of placement." The church article contains nearly forty paragraphs about its origin, historical development, various governance arrangements, and its beliefs and practices that take up many pages and which are supported by nearly eighty credible source citations, while the section on Court Cases and Lawsuits, that includes a reference to lawsuits and a cult allegation, is a mere two paragraphs at the end of the article with mostly news media sourcing. To attribute one of three paragraphs in the Lead on the topic of cult allegations and lawsuits that are thinly sourced is out of proportion with the overall substance of the article and its most important points. Meta Voyager (talk) 12:56, 22 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, though much of the article content is based on primary sources and quite a lot of it needs to be removed if secondary sources can't be found. At least the lawsuits and cult allegations material is based on good, secondary sources. Cordless Larry (talk) 18:16, 22 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The last two replies in this thread appear to be an effort to divert from the primary policy discussion about what is appropriate for the Lead and, instead, turn the discussion to a general statement about neutral point of view and the distinction between primary and secondary sourcing in the body of the article. In my view, the overarching concern about the reference to opinions on the cult status of the church in the third paragraph of the Lead is that these opinions don’t belong in the Lead at all according to WP:LEAD. The Lead should “establish context” and “explain why the topic is notable.” The “former members” reference in the Lead accomplishes neither.  It is sourced from a Rolling Stone article that ties the cult allegation to two lawsuits in Los Angeles County Court brought by a total of 7 individuals. In contrast, the church is described elsewhere in this Wiki article as having more than 100,000 adherents and in the Wiki article on the Restoration Movement as a church having origins in the American Restoration Movement and Churches of Christ in the United States that reach back to the 19th century.  The WP:UNDUE policies on “prominence of placement” further support why the opinions of a limited number of former members on the topic of cult status do not belong in the Lead.  According to recent reporting by the church, there are more than 700 church congregations associated with the International Churches of Christ, mostly outside the USA. Focusing on 2 cases in a Los Angeles, California court in the USA seems out of place. I am aware of the 2 subsequent cases filed in Los Angeles and my point remains the same. In all sincerity, I don’t find this issue to be a close call and that the third paragraph in the Lead should be removed; however, I’m interested in policy-based arguments that would suggest otherwise.  Can we return in this thread to a discussion of the key policies about the Lead an how they apply to the paragraph in question? Meta Voyager (talk) 15:38, 23 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You're quoting WP:LEDE selectively, leaving out the bit that says it should "summarize the most important points, including any prominent controversies". The cult allegations aren't just made in the Rolling Stone article in relation to the lawsuits but are a common feature of coverage of the church in secondary sources. For some further examples, see this ("International Churches of Christ...is largely seen as a cult"), this ("a reputed cult, the International Church of Christ") and this ("Imagine now, this very same healing community that most members describe as an awesome family portrayed as a 'dangerous cult'. Who makes such claims about this healing group? Ex-members, former leaders, anti-cult groups, and many university officials who have banned the group from campuses because of their 'deceptive recruiting techniques' and authoritarian structure"). Cordless Larry (talk) 18:10, 23 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the extra articles. The "former members" reference is also used to support an accusation of the church "covering up sexual abuse of children" and includes citations to single news articles in The Guardian and Los Angeles Times. The nature of the cover up accusations by former members is alarming and troubling, but, standing alone, does not make the reference sufficient to justify inclusion in the Lead. The paragraph in question also states that "[a]s of August 2023, some US branches of the church were the subject of multiple lawsuits." These references appear to be an effort to justify the inclusion of the paragraph as a "prominent controversy" WP:LEAD. However, the reference to a controversy related to the church is already acknowledged in the prior paragraph in the Lead and does not need to be repeated in another paragraph. A simple cross-reference to the Court Cases and Lawsuits section in the body of the article would be a sufficient way to alert the reader to controversy involving the church. Further and significantly, as of August, 2023 there were in fact no individual International Church of Christ congregations named in the cited lawsuits - only one congregation from the International Christian Church, a distinct and different church group that is recognized more appropriately in a separate Wikipedia page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kip_McKean#International_Christian_Church. This date stamped reference to lawsuits and the conflation of matters involving the International Churches of Christ and those of the International Christian Church are inaccuracies and represent original research that is prohibited by WP:OR as "a synthesis of published materials that reaches or implies a conclusion not stated by the sources." Meta Voyager (talk) 11:50, 26 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The reference to "multiple lawsuits" that are being reported in the news media as of a recent date also runs up against WP:RECENTISM "where an article has an inflated or imbalanced focus on recent events." The referenced lawsuits in state court are reported to be preceded by cases that the plaintiffs withdrew from federal court and refiled. Who can say at this early stage of litigation whether the current lawsuits will also be withdrawn or significantly amended by the plaintiffs? While a reference to pending court cases might be appropriate in another section of the article, it carries the characteristics of "breaking news" that are addressed in WP:NOTNEWS, “. . . breaking news should not be emphasized or otherwise treated differently from other information. Timely news subjects not suitable for Wikipedia may be suitable for our sister project Wikinews.” This description of pending court cases doesn't represent an enduring description of the subject matter in the International Churches of Christ article and is not appropriate for a prominent placement in the Lead. Meta Voyager (talk) 11:52, 26 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

RfC on Singapore court case[edit]

At International Churches of Christ#Court cases and lawsuits, the article currently states: The Central Christian Church in Singapore, a part of the ICOC family of churches,[citation needed] won a court case (SINGAPORE HIGH COURT – SUIT NOs 846 and 848 of 1992 Judges LAI KEW CHAI J Date 29 August 1994 Citation [1995] 1 SLR 115) in which the judge ruled against a newspaper that had accused the Church of being a cult.[citation needed] An expert on religious studies testified that the Central Christian Church's practices were "neither strange, unnatural or harmful."[1] The link between the Central Christian Church and the ICOC is supported by this primary source, provided by JamieBrown2011 in the discussion above.

The questions for the RfC are (a) whether the sourcing (including the primary source linking the Singapore church to the ICOC) is strong enough for this to be included and if so, (b) what the appropriate weight is to give this case and (c) whether it should be added to the article lede. Cordless Larry (talk) 15:35, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

As a first-time editor to this page, it seems that the question of whether to include the Singapore news article to provide balance for the allegations of the church being a “cult” is a settled issue under principles of WP:NPOV as the reference and inclusion of the Singapore Court case already exists under the Court Cases and Lawsuits section in the body of the article.  However, this discussion assumes that the third paragraph is appropriate for the Lead. I don’t think it is and have offered my reasons in NPOV: Adding summary comment to the lead. Talk:International Churches of Christ#NPOV: Adding summary comment to the lead Meta Voyager (talk) 19:50, 21 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ "NewspaperSG". nl.sg. Archived from the original on 28 September 2013.
Is the question here only about the link between the two churches? Because the mention of the supreme court cases is based on Straits Times and seems pretty legitimate. I think it is strong enough for it to be included in the article. Elmmapleoakpine (talk) 21:35, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
There's more than one question, Elmmapleoakpine (see a, b and c above). It's about whether the sourcing is strong enough to establish the link between the church in the Singapore case and the ICOC to include it in the ICOC article (the Straits Times source is good on the case but doesn't mention the ICOC), what weight to give it if it is included, and whether it also belongs in the article lede. Cordless Larry (talk) 21:51, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
In terms of the link to the ICOC, it is stated on their website that they are an ICOC church (scroll to the bottom) https://centralchristianchurch.sg/
It is also stated on the ICOChistory website that the Central Christian Church in Singapore is part of the ICOC and at the time of the lawsuit https://icochistory.org/download/la-story-courage-under-fire/?wpdmdl=754&refresh=659b9831268ab1704695857. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 12:50, 12 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
For reasons I already explained, the first of those sources isn't very helpful. I linked to the second one in the RfC text. Cordless Larry (talk) 17:07, 12 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
OK, so let me get this clear, you are confused/unsure as to whether the Central Christian Church is part of the ICOC. Yet it was started by the ICOC in 1988, and to this day remains in the ICOC https://centralchristianchurch.sg/our-history/ . Add to that, the lawsuit was thoroughly documented in the www.icochistory.org website and on the CCC’s own website https://centralchristianchurch.sg/our-legal-victory/. I am really unsure as to why you are confused. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 07:17, 17 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not confused, no. I believe that the church is part of the ICOC. That doesn't mean we don't need a reliable source for the purposes of WP:VERIFY. Cordless Larry (talk) 18:22, 17 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
WP:ABOUTSELF provides this, does it not? JamieBrown2011 (talk) 07:50, 18 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
In addition, as you can see in the discussion above, the question of following WP:NPOV has never been answered by those not wanting to add the link to the lede.
How does including the Singapore link (that is already in the article) not fit the WP:NPOV policy?
Neutrality and verifiability[edit]
Most problems with negative material can be avoided by adhering to standard WP policies, such as using good sources, balancing the content carefully, and writing in an unbiased way. When including negative material in an article, some things to check for include:
•    Ensure that the material is supported by reliable sources
•    Do not present the material in a way that over-emphasizes it
•     Always present positive viewpoints along with any negative information to give balance
Editaddict (talk) 17:39, 17 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • My own view is that the material belongs in the article, though I'd prefer a properly secondary source for the link between the churches. WP:WEIGHT requires us to give due weight to the prominence of each viewpoint in reliable sources. The Singapore case largely received local attention, whereas the more recent lawsuits have been covered by international media. The view of the expert cited in the Singapore source is just that - the view of a single expert - whereas there are multiple sources describing the ICOC as a cult. For those reasons, I don't think we should give this more than a couple of sentences in the article, and I don't think it belongs in the lede. Per WP:LEDE, the lede should summarise the most important aspects of the article, and this isn't one of those in my view. Cordless Larry (talk) 20:37, 17 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I hear what you are saying but there still is no answer to how including a simple statement with links in the lede does not follow this WP:NPOV policy. Please answer specifically each of these policies in relation to the simple statement to include in the lede.
    Neutrality and verifiability[edit]
    Most problems with negative material can be avoided by adhering to standard WP policies, such as using good sources, balancing the content carefully, and writing in an unbiased way. When including negative material in an article, some things to check for include:
    •    Ensure that the material is supported by reliable sources
    •    Do not present the material in a way that over-emphasizes it
    •     Always present positive viewpoints along with any negative information to give balance
    Editaddict (talk) 21:24, 17 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This is a request for comment seeking input from the Wikipedia community, not a Q&A session with me. I've expressed my view and will now leave it to others to express theirs. Cordless Larry (talk) 21:51, 17 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Since the problematic section that is under dispute, is you inserting a paragraph in the LEAD where you use the term “cult” 3x in 3 sentences and mention upcoming court cases 2x’s, I think WP:UNDUE would tell us to have that reduced to maybe 1 mention, because you are giving undue WEIGHT to the negative. Then by including those claims in the LEAD, and resisting including the court case where the church demonstrated and won, that they are not a cult (remember the other court cases you mention have not even happened yet) NPOV would say “Always present positive viewpoints along with any negative information to give balance”. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 08:11, 18 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove entirely: I would suggest a brief review of WP:LAWRS, which at least introduces some of why nothing in this paragraph is usable. Most egregiously, what an expert witness says in court is fundamentally different to what we can attribute to an expert RS in a WP article. It's a self-published source from an academic, which can only be used in very cautious circumstances -- furthermore, since the "publishing" was a court transcript, it's arguable that tbis is even WP:SPS. After that is the newspaper article on the court ruling -- are we citing it because it makes some useful statement or summary (or even analysis) of the ruling? If not. then we are effectively making an internal citation to the ruling itself, a primary source. Does the ruling itself say definitively that ICOC has proven misconduct or not? No, the ruling is about the misconduct of a newspaper. This serves a great example of how to misuse sources on issues of law. SamuelRiv (talk) 21:25, 24 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks for that WP:LAWRS, but there seems to be a fundamental misunderstanding. The source is not a court transcript but a WP:RS The Strait Times, a well respected Singapore newspaper. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 12:38, 25 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The referenced Singapore court case is a relevant example of WP:NPOV in practice as it represents an official court proceeding where the subject matter of whether an ICOC church was a cult was litigated at two levels of the Singapore court system.  The case was based on a claim that the church was defamed by The New Paper, a newspaper based in Singapore and Lianhe Wanbao, a Chinese evening daily at the time, but now merged with Shin Min Daily News. The lower court ruled that the newspapers’ declarations of the church as a cult did not constitute defamation and the higher court reversed the lower court’s decision. The Appeals Court concluded in its court opinion that the newspapers’ “fact” claim about the church being a cult was in error and awarded damages on the basis that the church was defamed. The history of the case itself makes clear that there are two viewpoints on the question of the church’s “cult” status. Another of the relevant values of the article is that the defendants, The New Paper and Lianhe Wanbao, and The Straits Times, the publisher of the article, were all owned at the time by the same parent company, Singapore Press Holdings, now known as SPH Media. The referenced Straits Times article carries in its headline, “The Appeals Court has ruled that two newspapers defamed the Central Christian Church by labelling it a ‘cult’“ and serves as an admission by a related party that two of its sister newspapers were found in error. Further, the use of the court case and the article that reports upon it are not contrary to the essay on the use of law sources found in WP:LAWRS.  The essay acknowledges that court opinions are among the types of “law” references that are acceptable as Wikipedia sources; however, they should be used carefully. In this thread, there may be a need to revise the language of the disputed paragraph, but, in my view, there is value in adding the court case reference and related Straits Times article as sources for a statement that there are opposing views to the allegation that the church is a cult. These sources provide balance and adhere to WP:NPOV. I disagree with the assertion of another editor to “remove entirely” and would instead invite the author of the paragraph to consider revisions with these thoughts in mind. Meta Voyager (talk) 23:40, 25 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I'm sorry, but you still seem to not understand. The court is not ruling on whether or not ICOC is a cult. Editors cannot interpret anything in primary sources of law or court rulings beyond its plain text (not how they apply, not what they imply -- same goes with any WP:Primary source). A newspaper is not a RS on legal interpretation unless they have a specialist correspondent or expert commentator.
    Furthermore, even if somewhere in the ruling the judge said in plain text "ICOC is definitely 100% a cult", that's WP:Undue because the case wasn't deciding that matter and the judge cannot make that expert opinion. (There may also be zero review or appeal to such a statement.)
    RS are not a binary. SamuelRiv (talk) 03:11, 27 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you for your very helpful comments further explaining the Wikipedia policy on WP:LAWRS. I understand better the concern and caution about referencing legal topics or court documents in a newspaper or when non-legal experts attempt to draw conclusions about them. Meta Voyager (talk) 22:51, 28 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    This reference on the outcome of the appeal should be helpful. <ref name="Straights Times2">{{cite web |last=Jin |first=Lim Seng |date=September 1, 1998 |title=Church wins appeal in libel case |url=https://eresources.nlb.gov.sg/newspapers/digitised/article/straitstimes19980901-1.2.31.11 |publisher=The Straights Times |page=26}}</ref> Nowa (talk) 22:16, 2 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed new paragraph on Singapore court case[edit]

I'd like to propose the following new paragraph on the Singapore court case. Comments are welcome.

===Lawsuit by an ICOC member church alleging defamation===

On November 23, 1991, two Singapore Newspapers, The New Paper (English), and Lianhe Wanbao(Chinese) published articles stating that the Singapore Central Christian Church (a member of ICOC) was a “cult”. The church sued the papers alleging defamation. An initial court ruling held that what the papers had written was fair and in the public interest. An appeals court, however, overruled the lower court stating that the papers had stated that the church was a cult as if that was a fact, when it was not a fact, but a comment. The papers were each ordered to pay the church $20,000. The New Paper had to pay the founder of the church, Mr. John Philip Louis, $30,000. The papers also had to pay the legal fees of the church and its founder. [1]

In the same ruling, the appeals court held that the bi-monthly, Singapore based, Christian magazine Impact, which had also characterized the church as a cult in an article, was written fairly from the standpoint of a Christian publication written for the Christian community. The church and Mr. Louis were ordered to pay Impact’s legal fees.[1]

Nowa (talk) 12:52, 5 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Since there was no comments, I went ahead and made the substitution with the new paragraph. If there are any concerns, we can discuss them here. Nowa (talk) 12:07, 8 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I suggest we make an addition: “According to Tan Ooi Boon, an expert in religious studies, the church was not a cult because its practices were “neither strange, unnatural or harmful” [2]
I disagree with the addition. The main reason is this is an article about ICOC as a whole. The Singapore lawsuit was related to an individual church that is a member of ICOC. Adding more detail about an individual case would be WP:TOOMUCH (INMHO). On the other hand, if the case itself or the individual church were sufficiently notable to warrant their own articles, then additional detail about the case might be a worthwhile addition to those articles, provided we could get access to the full Singapore Times article so we are sure of what exactly it is saying. Nowa (talk) 16:03, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
But there is already TOO MUCH, with 144 words dedicated to who paid who how much! I am suggesting one sentence on an important finding. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 14:54, 6 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The additional statement is sourced to an article published by The Strait Times, a recognized reliable source. See WP:Perennial source. In the current version of the LEAD, an expert’s opposite opinion about the cult status of the ICOC is identified. WP:NPOV would suggest that an alternative expert’s view published by a reliable source would offer balance and be appropriate, even if the reference is to one member congregation of the ICOC. Meta Voyager (talk) 11:17, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. I did find a copy of the full article. The Central Christian Church posted a copy of it here: "Church not a cult says expert witness" It's a little blurry, but overall legible. There's also a transcription of the article | here. If you would like to propose some edits to the current article based on this, that would be great. Nowa (talk) 17:56, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
OK, thanks, I have made some of those changes, happy to discuss further changes needed. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 17:59, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Per this revert, it looks like we still need consensus on whether or not to mention the testimony by J. Gordon Melton. Anyone care to propose language for further discussion? Nowa (talk) 22:17, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The current consensus was reached through an RfC. If you want to try to test whether there's consensus for a revised version of the text, I suggest that really needs another RfC. Cordless Larry (talk) 22:28, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@CordlessLarry, that is a curious statement, please explain how you think we reached consensus on that?JamieBrown2011 (talk) 06:55, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Well, perhaps I shouldn't have written "current consensus" - it's more a lack of consensus on inclusion of this element, as can be seen from reading the discussion at #RfC on Singapore court case. Cordless Larry (talk) 07:44, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Perhaps we will need another RfC, but let's see what language, if any, someone else proposes. We can then take it from there. Nowa (talk) 12:14, 14 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I would support the inclusion of the testimony of J. Gordon Melton or Tan Ooi Boon based on WP:NPOV in the lead to offer balance to Janja Lalich's view. Happy to collaborate on this. Psmidi (talk) 14:52, 14 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The policies clearly state that there needs to be a neutral point of view, WP:NPOV. Even reading the Fringe Theory policies notes especially that controversial topics needs to be handled in a "neutral manner." It notes those topics should also be handled in "proportion to their prominence", WP:WEIGHT. It does not seem balanced to include the sentiment of "former members" (which numerically leads to a minority view) without any view from another side. In this case there is testimony from an expert witness describing the church as "not a cult." WP:BALANCE, WP:NPOV, WP:WEIGHT all lead me to this conclusion. Based on WP:CONACHIEVE, I will wait for consensus before editing. XZealous (talk) 06:11, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The full quote from WP:NPOV is "Neutrality assigns weight to viewpoints in proportion to their prominence in reliable sources" - not in proportion to the numerical balance of members. Cordless Larry (talk) 07:35, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
My quoting was referring to the fringe theory policy that guides to not give certains aspects of a topic more weight than its prominence. A few members claiming something about an organization is not prominent enough to label that organizationas such. Therefore, it should be included in the article, but not given undue weight and spoken about with NPOV.
"Wikipedia article should not make a fringe theory appear more notable or more widely accepted than it is."
Also, by the nature of things, organizations do not need to describe themselves as "not a cult" up until the point somebody calls them one. Therefore, there won't be any sources claiming the ICOC is not a cult up until these accusations came out. There are a few that claim this, and views that claim the opposite. For a balanced and neutral approach, both should be included. They should also be included with due weight within the page itself, being that this page is about an entire organization, not just an isolated part of an organization.
Also, are you saying that the article should or should not include the quote from J Gordon Melton? XZealous (talk) 11:10, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
There are quite a few high-quality sources documenting the cult allegations though, including articles in quality newspapers and at least one academic book. That justifies inclusion. On the quote, I originally thought it was maybe worth including it in the article (not the lede) but SamuelRiv made a persuasive case against this in the RfC above. Cordless Larry (talk) 11:26, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
What does a court case involving one ICOC church in Singapore have to do with the entirety of the ICOC? Just because some court in Singapore found that the Singapore ICOC church is not a cult does not mean that can apply to the whole organization. The ICOC isn't headquartered in Singapore. 2600:1700:4260:35D0:5502:6AC5:94B9:7EB1 (talk) 11:56, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
From what I am reading the court found that the newspaper violated the Singapore church's rights when calling it a cult? The court wasn't ruling on whether or not the Singapore church is a cult or not? If Singapore law applies everywhere then let's bring back caning? You steal something you get beaten? Or your hand cut off? How does that make sense? 2600:1700:4260:35D0:5502:6AC5:94B9:7EB1 (talk) 12:04, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
In the article there is an allegation in the Lead and the body of the article of the church being a cult derived from pleadings from pending court cases filed in a single U.S. city, Los Angeles, CA, and a supporting reference to an academic expert. References to the court case in Singapore on similar allegations of the cult status of the church that include the testimony of another academic expert provide a contrary point of view contributing to NPOV. However, in my view all of us are traveling down this rabbit hole unnecessarily. The original court allegations are poorly sourced, subject to WP:RECENT problems and given undue weight (WP:UNDUE) by being included in the Lead as discussed elsewhere on this Talk page. I have begun conversations with an administrator about the opportunity to rework the article to conform to the "encyclopedia" intentions of WP. Meta Voyager (talk) 15:11, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Please note that the heading of this section suggests that it's an RfC, but the RfC process hasn't been followed, so it's not listed as one. Cordless Larry (talk) 15:47, 6 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

That's helpful. Thanks. Nowa (talk) 19:31, 6 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Having reviewed the RfC process, I see that I've mislabeled this section. This is not a formal RfC and I don't think a formal RfC is appropriate at this time. I'll modify the section heading accordingly. Nowa (talk) 11:49, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

WP:RECENT[edit]

I know this is an essay and not a policy but how does this section in the lawsuits not go directly against the spirit of an encyclopedia which is supposed to capture content with “Enduring notability”?

“According to a report in Rolling Stone, the plaintiffs' "attorney says they plan to temporarily shelve federal RICO claims related to the alleged 'pyramid scheme' and to refile all of them — with an emphasis on the abuse claims — in state courts".”

- This is putting in content and events that haven’t even happened yet!! It is not only against RECENT, this is FUTURISTIC! JamieBrown2011 (talk) 08:49, 4 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I believe the statement is appropriate since it is properly referenced. See WP:CRYSTAL:

It is appropriate to report discussion and arguments about the prospects for success of future proposals and projects or whether some development will occur, if discussion is properly referenced.

Also, it looks like the follow up cases may have been filed. See Angeles Superior Court case lookup for cases:
Case Number: 23STCV24432
JANE ROE 4, ET AL. VS INTERNATIONAL CHURCHES OF CHRIST, INC., ET AL.
Filing Courthouse: Pomona Courthouse South
Filing Date: 10/06/2023
Case Type: Intentional Bodily Injury/Property Damage/Wrongful Death (e.g., assault, battery, vandalism, etc.) (General Jurisdiction)
Status: Pending
Related: 23STCV16423 on 10/23/2023
Related: 23STCV16430 on 10/23/2023
Related: 23STCV16423 on 11/15/2023
I haven't seen these cases covered in any wp:RS, so we will have to wait until if/when someone covers them before mentioning them in the article. Nowa (talk) 22:21, 4 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Nova, however you are confusing the Federal cases that are “going to be re-filed” with the state cases that have been filed. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 07:55, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the reply. I'm not quite sure what you are saying. The quote from Rolling Stone says that the intention is to shelve the federal claims and refile them in state courts, does it not? Nowa (talk) 15:48, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, but the court cases that you placed above are state cases not federal. WP is quite clear that content in an article should be “enduring in nature” and is WP:NOTNEWS. Placing content in an WP article, even if it is published in a RS, about a “possible future event”, can certainly be placed in a blog or gossip column but violates the purpose of an encyclopedia. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 14:46, 6 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Remove entirely - The edits that have been recently added in an attempt to improve the Lead and Court Cases and Lawsuits sections of this article, despite the editors best intentions, have wandered away from WP policies pertaining to NPOV, LAWRS, SOURCES and RECENTISM. In my view, the paragraphs in both sections relating to recent news publications should be removed entirely and replaced with a more general and reliably sourced description of the existence of controversies involving the church. According to WP:LAWRS as elaborated upon by SamuelRiv elsewhere on this Talk page, “Editors cannot interpret anything in primary sources of law or court rulings beyond its plain text (not how they apply, not what they imply -- same goes with any WP:Primary source). A newspaper is not a RS on legal interpretation unless they have a specialist correspondent or expert commentator.” In the case of statements in the article about the church being a cult or covering up certain abuses, the sources cited are articles in the Los Angeles Times dated February 8, 2023 and the Guardian dated March 19, 2023 that reference pending federal court cases. Subsequently, these federal lawsuits were reported to be withdrawn by plaintiffs’ lawyers in a Rolling Stone article dated August 3, 2023 also cited as source. Continuing to rely on articles that are no longer accurate about pending lawsuits to support any inferences about the church surmised from those lawsuits is not reliable sourcing, even if the sources themselves are known to be reliable. “After a year (more or less), secondary sources tend to become less reliable or unreliable except as history.” WP:Identifying Reliable Sources (Law). This instance is a good example of why WP:RECENTISM urges editors to “aim to a long-term historical view,” rather than have an “imbalanced focus on recent events.” These recent paragraphs about the church are further flawed by citing and using legal interpretations from the Rolling Stone article when the magazine has no demonstrated expertise on legal journalism or the law. The listing of Perennial sources maintained by Wikipedia states, “[a]ccording to a 2021 RfC discussion, there is unanimous consensus among editors that Rolling Stone is generally unreliable for politically and societally sensitive issues reported since 2011 . . .” WP:ROLLINGSTONEPOLITICS. Further, any reliance on references in the Rolling Stone article to state cases that were to be filed or their subsequent listing on a Los Angeles court docket could only be used to acknowledge the cases’ existence, not their content. I agree with Nowa that these cases should not be mentioned in the article.Meta Voyager (talk) 11:46, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the reference to WP:ROLLINGSTONEPOLITICS. I reviewed the discussion that led to the characterization Rolling Stone as being unreliable for reporting of "politically and societally sensitive issues". See Wikipedia:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard/Archive_353#Rolling_Stone. The editors who commented make a strong case that the way Rolling Stone handled the story A Rape on Campus (amongst other things) makes them unreliable for stories of this type. And this is a story of that type. I would be in favor, therfore, of removing the citation to Rolling Stone and all content for which it is the only support (e.g., the plaintiff's attorney quote). Nowa (talk) 21:14, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Since we are committed to following Wikipedia policy, I agree with Meta Voyager and Nowa. Editaddict (talk) 16:20, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I have added the testimony and removed the Rolling Stone reference. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 18:03, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you. Unfortunately, the Rolling Stones reference was the only secondary reference I could find that said that the cases were terminated. I'd like to recommend, however, that we mention that the cases were "voluntarily dismissed without prejudice by the plaintiffs" based on the court records. Otherwise readers will be left with the impression that the cases are still ongoing. Nowa (talk) 20:10, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Nowa, I agree. That makes perfect sense. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 07:19, 14 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Rolling Stone is a very famous and noteworthy magazine/publication no? It has legitimate information. It's not like some tabloid at the grocery checkout line. Rolling Stone magazine is journalism. 2600:1700:4260:35D0:49B2:4C72:D98D:5540 (talk) 05:29, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I used to think Rolling Stone was reliable as well. Unfortunately, it's journalistic quality for news related items had degraded substantially since 2011. See Wikipedia:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard/Archive_353#Rolling_Stone for a further discussion. Nowa (talk) 16:15, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I would agree that it makes most sense according to the policy to only add furthet information on these court cases as they happen. It is best to keep this page to what has happened rather than speculating on what will happen. If the court cases progress, there will then be reliable sources of information we can include. For the time being, this page should only report on events that have happened. That way we stick best to WP:NPOV
I think we should also keep in mind WP:BALASP and WP:WEIGHT as to not give the article too much focus on selected topics. XZealous (talk) 09:19, 14 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Having taken a closer look at WP policies WP:NPOV, and especially WP:RECENTISM, I would tend to agree with @Meta Voyager detailed assessment and seeming consensus of @Nowa@XZealousand @JamieBrown2011 to remove any references to the current court cases until a verdict has been reached. Psmidi (talk) 14:21, 14 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Just to clarify, I believe the section International_Churches_of_Christ#Lawsuits_related_to_alleged_coverup_of_sexual_abuse should remain. The only question I was posing was whether or not we should use primary sources (i.e., court documents) to indicate that the cases have been closed. Nowa (talk) 20:18, 14 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
As far as I see it, use of court documents would be contrary to WP:PSTS. We need secondary sources reporting on the court cases. Cordless Larry (talk) 20:33, 14 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the link to WP:PSTS. I think the relevant guidance is "A primary source may be used on Wikipedia only to make straightforward, descriptive statements of facts..." Nowa (talk) 13:33, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Agreed. You don’t have to have a secondary or 3rd party source for absolutely everything. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 08:55, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Interpreting legal cases is one of those cases where you do require secondary sources, though. Cordless Larry (talk) 11:41, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
If the secondary sources do not prevent a NPOV, this Wikipedia page would therefore not present a neutral view. @Cordless Larry, could you present what your conclusion on this? It seems that consesus has been reached on presenting a balanced and NPOV about the court cases and cult accusations in this page. XZealous (talk) 12:31, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I don't really understand your question, XZealous. What do you mean by "the secondary sources do not prevent a NPOV"? Cordless Larry (talk) 13:15, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry, meant to say "If the secondary source does not present a NPOV." XZealous (talk) 16:34, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
According to WP:NPOV, writing from an NPOV "means representing fairly, proportionately, and, as far as possible, without editorial bias, all the significant views that have been published by reliable sources on a topic". If you don't think that the sources present a neutral view themselves, then you'd need to take it up with them, but NPOV doesn't mean that the sources have to be neutral. Cordless Larry (talk) 16:43, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Just to clarify, I don't think any legal interpretation is necessary to state something like "The cases have been voluntarily dismissed without prejudice by request of the plaintiffs and defendants". We would simply be making a "descriptive statement of facts" per WP:PRIMARY based on the court records.
Having said that, I don't have strong feelings one way or the other. If we leave things as they are, a reader might be left with the impression that the cases are ongoing. That isn't completely false since similar cases have been recently filed in California state courts. On the other hand if we put in that the cases are closed based on the primary records, then an equal argument could be made that we should put in something about the new cases that have been opened, also based on primary records. The net effect is the same.
Absent a consensus, therefore, it looks like we will remain at status quo. Nowa (talk) 17:39, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Wouldn't it require interpretation to determine that these are the refiled cases though? They're cases involving ICOC, but don't we require secondary sourcing to link them to the original lawsuits? Cordless Larry (talk) 17:49, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It would, so we would not be able to say the state cases were refilings of the federal cases. Nowa (talk) 21:42, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
My other concern is that if there's no secondary coverage of the cases, we have no indication that they're notable. I don't know how many court cases the ICOC has been involved in, but I presume there have been a few and it takes secondary coverage to determine which are notable. Cordless Larry (talk) 21:54, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with your concern. We don't have any indication that the state filings are notable. Nowa (talk) 22:26, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Totally agree, there are 4 or maybe 5 state cases in total, all in California and nearly 800 ICOC churches worldwide. Including these state court cases for a church in over 150 nations is WP:UNDUE.
- I also think there is far too much detail given to the Singapore case WP:WEIGHT. A brief mention with the outcome is all that is needed.
- Finally, if we choose to keep the “cult” allegations that @CorlessLarry seems determined to keep in the article, then the two WP:RS we have disagreeing with that claim should be included as well. 1. The Christian Chronicle reports that the church of Christ apologized for using the term “cult” in describing the ICOC.[1] 2. In the Straight Times article it is mentioned that an expert witness testified that the church was not a cult [2] JamieBrown2011 (talk) 16:23, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The Christian Chronicle doesn't appear to be an independent source. Cordless Larry (talk) 18:04, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
What do you think it is? JamieBrown2011 (talk) 18:23, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Well, it describes itself as an international newspaper for Churches of Christ. Cordless Larry (talk) 18:26, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
That is a separate group from the International Churches of Christ. They have their own Wikipage if you would like to go read up on them. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 18:32, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
They have common origins though, no? Churches of Christ#Separation of the International Churches of Christ. Cordless Larry (talk) 18:51, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, I think the separation occurred about 30 or 40 years ago. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 19:30, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I've asked for input at Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard#The Christian Chronicle on the International Churches of Christ. Cordless Larry (talk) 19:35, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
👍 JamieBrown2011 (talk) 19:47, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
How can a current online encyclopedia be constantly updated if no current information is added? If the ICOC shut down operations tomorrow would that not be noteworthy? But it's recent news? So it can't be added to the article? 2600:1700:4260:35D0:5502:6AC5:94B9:7EB1 (talk) 12:11, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Whoa. I just did a simple Google search and about 30 results came up talking about the ICOC being a cult. Red flag? 2600:1700:4260:35D0:5502:6AC5:94B9:7EB1 (talk) 12:13, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The issue is whether or not those Google search results are reliable secondary sources. If so, and if they have content that is not found in the article, then you might want to propose new content here on the talk page. Under normal circumstances, you can just add it to the article, but since the characterization of the ICOC as a cult is a contentious issue, it would be better to vet new content here for further discussion. Nowa (talk) 16:17, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Is "racially integrated" worth mentioning in the article?[edit]

The first sentence in the lede emphasizes that ICOC congregations are "racially integrated". No doubt that is true, but is that worth mentioning? None of the references cited make a point about racial integration being a distinguishing feature of the organization. If we can remove it, then we can clean up the last "third-party source needed" tag. Nowa (talk) 19:25, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed. Unless a secondary source makes clear that this is an unusual or notable feature, it's not justified to include it. Cordless Larry (talk) 20:09, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
So that is a unique feature, most churches are very much divided into black churches or white churches or Asian. There was an article by the Barna research group that described this racial divide in many mainstream churches, which I can try and find. But it is a longstanding part of the page and according to WP:ABOUTSELF is usable. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 06:47, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the reference to WP:ABOUTSELF. I did a little more digging and it looks like in 2020, in response to pandemic related racial tensions, the leadership of the US and Canadian ICOC churches initiated a program called "Social, Cultural, Unity and Diversity" (aka SCUAD). This is an ongoing effort providing multiple resources and programs to address racial issues. It has its own web site. I haven't found any secondary references (yet) that talk about this effort, but I don't think that precludes using primary sources per WP:ABOUTSELF for a modest mention in the article. Once that is done, it may inform whether or not "racially integrated" is the right phrase in the lede and whether or not a secondary source is needed. Nowa (talk) 17:35, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I found some RS related to racial integration and added a short section to the article. Nowa (talk) 23:34, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Are not a lot of churches racially integrated? A lot of the churches in Kentucky seem to be racially integrated meaning that they have Whites, Blacks, Asians, Latinos, and other races as members. My Uncle Howard was a member of a church in Hopkinsville that had all races. 2600:1700:4260:35D0:5502:6AC5:94B9:7EB1 (talk) 12:17, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The key issue is whether or not the racial integration policies and practices of ICOC and its member churches are notable. Based on reliable secondary sources, it apparently is. See the newly created section International_Churches_of_Christ#Racial_integration_in_ICOC_churches. Nowa (talk) 16:19, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Here is another secondary source: "The fact that ICOC congregations are typically multicultural has also gained the positive attention of national media in recent years. A considerable ministry of women to other women, as well as the involvement of instrumental music in worship, further distinguish the ICOC from mainline Churches of Christ." Encyclopedia of Stone Campbell Movement p1720 Editaddict (talk) 16:49, 11 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
If this is an acceptable source, I will put it in the article [1] JamieBrown2011 (talk) 10:25, 12 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Could we have clarification on the page number for the quote? The book appears to have just over 800 pages, so I don't see how it could be on p. 1720. Cordless Larry (talk) 13:52, 12 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Good question. The Kindle version of the book gives the page number as 1320. Sorry for the typo. How do we indicate its the digital version? Editaddict (talk) 15:41, 12 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
FYI I believe Kindle “pages” are calculated based on how a document is displayed on a device. Larger screens will have different pages than small screens. Nowa (talk) 18:58, 12 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks to Doc Taxon, I now have a copy of the print version of the chapter, so I've added the relevant part of the quote to the article with the correct page numbers. Cordless Larry (talk) 11:05, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Should we remove {{Third-party|date=September 2023}}?[edit]

Several additional third party sources have been added since the {{Third-party|date=September 2023}} was added. Should we remove this tag now? Nowa (talk) 13:45, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yes. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 16:45, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I still see a lot of sources associated with the subject in the reference list. Many of these are now cited alongside independent sources (thanks for your efforts, Nowa) but I'd want to do a proper check through to find any instances where material is still cited to a non-independent source alone before I supported removal of the template. Cordless Larry (talk) 17:44, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
There are a lot of third party sources in the article? Really? 2600:1700:4260:35D0:5502:6AC5:94B9:7EB1 (talk) 12:18, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Seems like there are still a majority of ICOC sources? I guess the ICOC sources would be the best sources on the ICOC? 2600:1700:4260:35D0:5502:6AC5:94B9:7EB1 (talk) 12:22, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The key issue is whether or not there is content in the article that still needs a third party reference. If so, it should be tagged with {{third-party inline}}. We can then collectively look for appropriate references and create a better article. Nowa (talk) 16:21, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your work on this Nowa. I believe there is enough focus now on identifying proper sourcing that the tag can be removed. Put me in the yes category. I also appreciate the view expressed earlier in this thread that those with an ICOC connection might make a meaningful contribution to editing the ICOC article. Meta Voyager (talk) 15:11, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Do we still have any "unreliable sources"?[edit]

Any unreliable sources still left? If not, then we can remove {{Unreliable sources|date=September 2023}}. If so, then let's tag them, and either find a reliable replacement or remove them. Nowa (talk) 16:33, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I believe there are, yes. See Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard/Archive 414#Reliability and independence of sources for International Churches of Christ for context here. Cordless Larry (talk) 17:29, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the link. It looks like we need to review any content that is solely supported by "Into All Nations: A History of the International Churches of Christ" since it is essentially a self-published source. Nowa (talk) 20:39, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I've reviewed all article content supported by "Into All Nations". All of it has one or more additional RS provided. Were there any other sources that might be considered unreliable that we should check out? Nowa (talk) 22:15, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The two instances of reference 45 in the current version don't have additional RSs. Cordless Larry (talk) 10:17, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
A further issue might be that while most of the statements sourced to primary or unreliable sources now additionally have better sources, the way we've arrived at this version of the text is still being driven by what the primary or unreliable source says, so there's a risk that even though better sources are present, the POV of the original source is still determining what's being covered. If the text was rewritten based on what secondary sources highlight as notable or important, it might look different. Cordless Larry (talk) 11:41, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I agree. I think it will look very different as we incorporate the material from the new RS. Nowa (talk) 00:04, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I support the idea of rewriting much of the text of the ICOC article and believe there is an opportunity to refresh the article with appropriate sourcing and good faith editing. I hope to have some suggestions to share on the Talk page soon. Meta Voyager (talk) 15:23, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Actually, it looks like the "About ICOC" citations could use some careful attention. Nowa (talk) 23:39, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Cordless LarryThis link seems to not exist anymore. Was it moved, deleted, or did something else happen to it? I was going to review the issues of reliable sources on this page. Thanks! XZealous (talk) 07:21, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion is still there in the archive. I just clicked the link myself and it works for me. Cordless Larry (talk) 09:31, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Cleaning up paragraph on "Sinner's Prayer"[edit]

The paragraph on "Sinner's Prayer" needs cleaned up. In particular, several persons are cited with commentary on the Sinner's Prayer who are not spokespeople for the ICOC. If anyone has any concerns, let's discuss here. Nowa (talk) 17:35, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for cleaning this up. Here is what the church has written on the sinners prayer https://disciplestoday.org/bible-study-teacher-s-corner-item-8589-teacher-s-corner-the-sinner-s-prayer-a-brief-history-of-a-novel-practice/ JamieBrown2011 (talk) 09:21, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Interesting read. Thanks. Nowa (talk) 19:23, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Cleaning up Paragraph starting with "Prior to the Early 2000's"[edit]

It seems like this paragraph is insufficiently sourced. The paragraph jumps to conclusions that the source itself does not jump to. For instance, "and whether or not it is acceptable for ICOC members to have Christian Fellowship with non ICOC members (e.g., dating)" is not mentioned in the source article. There is, however, a mention of ICOC members dating outside the ICOC, but the source does not go into detail on this or the Church's historical and current stance of it. The source also does not mention a rule about ICOC members being able to or not being able to have "Christian Fellowship with non ICOC members." That sentence is not supported by the source, and should then be removed.

I also want to note that the paragraph above states "anyone, anywhere who follows God’s plan of salvation in the Bible and lives under the Lordship of Jesus, will be saved. Christians are saved by the grace of God, through their faith in Jesus Christ, at baptism." This is a direct quote taken from an article about ICOC beliefs. The following paragraph, which we are addressing here, has differing information about ICOC beliefs, specifically regarding baptism. For instance, "the ICOC taught that only baptisms within ICOC member churches were legitimate and hence only members of ICOC churches had had their sins forgiven and were saved" is not stated in the source article. This, at best, would be an assumption from the source, not information taken from the source itself.

I do see in the sourced article is a discussion on being "too judgmental about people in other Churches" in the past specifically regarding baptism. Perhaps there can be something written about this and how the ICOC has changed from this (noting the "About the ICOC" article), but it needs to be accurate based on sufficient sources, not assumed from sources. I suggest we remove this paragraph until it can be correctly and sufficiently sourced.

I will wait for further comment before making changes. XZealous (talk) 08:02, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for pointing these issues out. After rereading the "Baptismal Cognizance" article, I agree that "(e.g. dating)" should be removed and have already done so.
Here's what I now see as the correspondence between what the current paragraph says and what the Baptismal Cognizance article says.
I welcome further edits to bring the two more in line.Nowa (talk) 19:58, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Current article wording Support in "Baptismal Cognizance"
Prior to the early 2000s, the ICOC taught that only baptisms within ICOC member churches were legitimate and hence only members of ICOC churches had had their sins forgiven and were saved. Baptismal cognizance simply means what is understood or needs to be understood at the point of baptism to experience a valid baptism. In one sense, it is a more narrow way to define who is a Christian and who is not; who is saved and who is not – based on having experienced a biblically valid new birth....

...The old extreme was to teach or leave the impression that no person outside our ICOC boundaries of fellowship could have been converted correctly....

In 2003, however, subsequent to the departure of Kip McKean, the leadership issued letters of apology stating that they had been "too judgmental". in our leadership apology letters of 2003, we apologized for being too judgmental toward people in other churches, but we did not define what we meant by being too judgmental.
As a consequence, many within ICOC began to accept that baptisms outside of ICOC churches could be legitimate. That failure proved to be a serious one, allowing many of our members to assume that almost any sincere believer in Christ was likely acceptable to God, regardless of conversion experience or church affiliation. We went from one extreme to another.
What exactly makes a baptism outside of ICOC legitimate and whether or not it is acceptable for ICOC members to have Christian Fellowship with non ICOC members (e.g., dating) is still a matter of debate within the ICOC.

In the past, it was extremely rare to find a person whose conversion experience sounded as if it could possibly be valid. In the future, we are more likely to find those whose baptisms may in fact be biblical (whether their church is biblically sound or not). In that case, we will have to be wiser in how we study with them, and decide each situation on an individual basis (which we should always do anyway)...

Primary Sources for the “Beliefs” Section[edit]

@CordLessLarry has placed a tag on the page concerning using primary sources for the beliefs section. Is this justified? JamieBrown2011 (talk) 08:13, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The section is almost entirely based on sources affiliated with the ICOC. Cordless Larry (talk) 09:33, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@CordLessLarry, this is simply not true or accurate, there are at least three outside sources.
- The Christian Chronicle: [2]
- Pepperdine University [3]
- The Encylopedia of the Stone-Campbell Movement [1] JamieBrown2011 (talk) 18:10, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ a b Douglas Allen Foster and Anthony L. Dunnavant, ed. (2004). The Encyclopedia of the Stone-Campbell Movement: Christian Church (Disciples of Christ), Christian Churches/Churches of Christ, Churches of Christ. Wm. B. Eerdmans Publishing. ISBN 978-0-8028-3898-8. ISBN 0-8028-3898-7, ISBN 978-0-8028-3898-8 Cite error: The named reference "Encyclopedia of the Stone-Campbell Movement: Baptism" was defined multiple times with different content (see the help page).
  2. ^ Kip McKean, "Interview with Kip McKean," Archived 21 July 2011 at the Wayback Machine The Christian Chronicle, January 2004
  3. ^ (2010) "The International Churches of Christ Statement of Shared Beliefs," Leaven: Vol. 18: Iss. 2, Article 4.
An interview with the ICOC's former leader and a statement by it are clearly not independent of the ICOC. Cordless Larry (talk) 20:58, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Cordless Larry. This section is about the ICOC’s beliefs. It would then be appropriate for them to describe what their beliefs are. It is within policy (WP:SELFSOURCE) for an organization to write about themselves “especially in articles about themselves.” There would be no issue of neutrality here since what is stated in the sources is being presented in the belief section. I also note that you have not given a policy that this section breaks. You stated that it is not “independent of the ICOC.” Within this section, the source does not need to be independent of the ICOC. XZealous (talk) 19:39, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry but we don't simply trust organisations or individuals to give honest and reliable accounts of their own beliefs, unmediated by secondary sources. Cordless Larry (talk) 20:23, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Please refer to a specific WP policy that states that. It seems very unprofessional that you cannot simply state this is what an organization states it believes. And how can we know any other source is more trustworthy on what they believe? Editaddict (talk) 20:52, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Please see WP:RSPRIMARY, WP:BESTSOURCES and WP:INDEPENDENT. Cordless Larry (talk) 20:54, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Policy
: Unless restricted by another policy,
  1. Primary sources that have been reputably published may be used in Wikipedia, but only with care, because it is easy to misuse them.
  2. Any interpretation of primary source material requires a reliable secondary source for that interpretation.
  3. A primary source may be used on Wikipedia only to make straightforward, descriptive statements of facts that can be verified by any educated person with access to the primary source but without further, specialized knowledge. For example about a novel may cite passages to describe the plot, but any interpretation needs a secondary source.
  4. Do not analyze, evaluate, interpret, or synthesize material found in a primary source yourself; instead, refer to reliable secondary sources that do so.
According to WP, Primary sources may be used if stated factually. Cautions are against analysis, evaluation, interpretation, etc. So how is it not valid to factually quote an organization's listing of their beliefs? Editaddict (talk) 21:08, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not suggesting that we can't report the organisation's explanation of its own beliefs. The problem is the section being based almost exclusively on such sources. Cordless Larry (talk) 21:13, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"we don't simply trust organisations or individuals to give honest and reliable accounts of their own beliefs, unmediated by secondary sources." seems to be the definition of "analysis, evaluation, interpretation, etc." that WP:RSPRIMARY warns against. Editaddict (talk) 15:54, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
No, you're mistaken. WP:RSPRIMARY warns against engaging in that interpretation of primary sources in articles. The quote above is from my comment here on the talk page, where I'm explaining why we shouldn't rely solely on sources associated with an article subject. Cordless Larry (talk) 16:11, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
If you have already analyzed, evaluated and interpreted that "we don't simply trust organisations or individuals to give honest and reliable accounts of their own beliefs, unmediated by secondary sources." haven't you already done what WP:RSPRIMARY is warning against in your editing philosophy that impacts how you approach primary sources on their own beliefs? Editaddict (talk) 16:26, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
No. I'm just explaining why that policy exists. Cordless Larry (talk) 16:29, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
If the interview were done by any other independent source wouldn't it count? Why discriminate against the Christian Chronicle? Editaddict (talk) 19:43, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It's the fact that it's an interview that's the problem, not the publisher. Cordless Larry (talk) 20:25, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Cordless Larry. I referred back to the policies you stated. There is still no issue for the sources being used in the “Belief” section. Even with WP:RSPRIMARY (as you mentioned) states a primary source “ can be both reliable and useful in certain situations.” Using them with caution to avoid “original research.” The “Belief” section does not follow under “original research” because it is sourced, and only information from those sources are being used. Therefore, it becomes appropriate for the primary sources to be used here.
WP:BESTSOURCES (as you mentioned) aims to achieve the most authoritative source. When it comes to a section on beliefs, the organization stating beliefs is the most authoritative. An outside source cannot decide an organization's beliefs.
It seems we are forgetting the context of this section. WP:REPUTABLE even notes that proper sourcing “always depends on context; common sense and editorial judgment.” You are claiming that it needs a tag only because it mainly uses primary sources (which, as noted above, there are a few secondary sources used in this section). However, in view of the context, that source is actually the most appropriate for this section. In a section about an organization's subjective beliefs, they become the authority on reporting such. How can an outside author determine an organization's beliefs better than the organization’s self reporting? This section only aims to report what the ICOC reports about their own beliefs, not an interpretation of them.
Noting that it is also within WP to self report in an appropriate way (WP:SELFSOURCE) as long as it follows the 5 guidelines given.
  1. The material is neither unduly self-serving nor an exceptional claim
    1. The “Belief” section only claims to report beliefs on the ICOC, no exceptional claims.
  2. It does not involve claims about third parties (such as people, organizations, or other entities).
    1. The “Belief” section only includes belief statements abotu the ICOC, no other outside organization
    2. The only debatable point on this would be this sentence: “The ICOC like the Christian Church, in contrast to the CoC, consider permissible practices that the New Testament does not expressly forbid”
      1. Albeit this sentence is sourced from a book not affiliated with the ICOC as far as I can tell
  3. It does not involve claims about events not directly related to the subject.
    1. The “Belief” section only involves claims about ICOC beliefs, nothing else
  4. There is no reasonable doubt as to its authenticity.
    1. The “Belief” section is sourced from the ICOC itself, therefore giving it the best authenticity
  5. The Wikipedia article is not based primarily on such sources.
    1. The “Belief” section is not the entire article, and as stated before this section is appropriate for WP:SELFSOURCE
WP:SELFSOURCE also states that the great majority of the article must use independent sources. The “Belief” section does not make up a “great majority” of the article. If there are still issues with sourcing from other sections, we can continue that discussion in the “Do we still have any ‘unreliable sources’?” section of the talk page. XZealous (talk) 08:25, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Would you argue the same for a political party (that the organisation itself is the best source)? It seems a very strange attitude that third-party sources aren't required for describing the beliefs of an article subject because it allows for all sorts of potential self-interested misrepresentation. Cordless Larry (talk) 08:28, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I would argue it for any organization being able to state their own beliefs. As it happens, many organizations have a "statement of belief" on their own website. However, how the beliefs are played out in history, the agreeableness of them, and its current application are appropriate to use secondary sources for. I would argue that it is more likely that third-party sources would have "self-interested misrepresentation" of other people's beliefs. We should allow a person or organization to clearly state their own beliefs themselves. XZealous (talk) 08:42, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Even if you find it strange, it is within WP to allow the ICOC to report on their own beliefs in the "Belief" section. XZealous (talk) 08:43, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
To repeat myself (see above): I'm not suggesting that we can't report the organisation's explanation of its own beliefs. The problem is the section being based almost exclusively on such sources. Cordless Larry (talk) 08:45, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I understand your issue with the section. However, as explained above, it does not go against WP. XZealous (talk) 13:03, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I would like to add that this tag was added without first making a discussion of it on the talk page. Being that this is an active talk page, it would be appropriate to address it here first. WP:WTRMT rule 4 states this as ground for removing the tag.
If it needs to be re-added, we should come to a consensus on the talk page first. "Responsible Tagging" includes editors "label the problem with the appropriate tag. As needed they then leave information clarifying what should be done on the talk page." Being this talk page is frequently used, it will be needed to discuss tags on the talk page.
Please refer to WP:RESPTAG, WP:TAGBOMB, and WP:MTR for guidelines on appropriate tagging. XZealous (talk) 08:35, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
My honest reaction to the article is that it is longwinded and hard to read. Unless someone is directly researching the ICOC it contains way too much information. The article makes it sound like the ICOC is a very important organization when it is not. The article says the ICOC believes in the Bible, Jesus Christ, some sort of discipling system, and that they are the one true church. The ICOC may or may not be a cult because of their aggressive recruiting tactics and the leaders of the ICOC are being accused of child abuse. That's basically the gist of the article. The encyclopedia entry needs to be shortened a lot. Someone is putting too much work and/or care into advertising the ICOC through this wikipedia article. 2600:1700:4260:35D0:B424:F403:D668:72F (talk) 10:45, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your input @User:2600:1700:4260:35D0:B424:F403:D668:72F. However, "this is the talk page for discussing improvements to the International Churches of Christ article.
This is not a forum for general discussion of the article's subject." as referred to by the top of this page. If you have suggestions on how to improve this page, feel free to start a new topic thread. Thanks. XZealous (talk) 13:08, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The IP above is explicitly saying what they think is wrong with the article and how they think it can be improved -- i.e. it's too long, reads like an advertisement, and it can be shortened to focus a few key concepts. At no point do they say anything about ICOC itself. SamuelRiv (talk) 17:14, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I agree that the article needs to be rewritten and shortened. The outline of the article seems to be locked in the past, in part due to the current debate among editors about what is appropriate sourcing for information about the church. I believe a significant restructuring and shortening of the article is possible with a more generous view on the value of "about self" sourcing so that factual information from church sources could be considered for inclusion in the article and clearly identified as to the source. This approach would seem particularly appropriate for the "Beliefs" section of the article. In a significant rewrite of the article, the narrative sections that may be viewed as promotional or advertising could also be addressed through the Wikipedia editing process. In another section of the Talk page, I propose a more lenient approach to "about self" sourcing when appropriate. Meta Voyager (talk) 17:50, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with your suggestion that this tag needs to be removed if there is no record of a discussion first occurring on the Talk Page as specified by the WP:WTRMT rule 4 Editaddict (talk) 01:53, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
There's no such requirement for a discussion before that tag is placed but in any case, the discussion is now taking place. Cordless Larry (talk) 07:27, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Please explain why WP:WTRMT Rule 4 does not apply here. "When an article talk page discussion has not been initiated (for templates requesting it);" Editaddict (talk) 15:01, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Well, that page doesn't document a policy, so it's not really a rule, but clearly discussion has been initiated here and in any case, the wording of the template message doesn't request such a discussion. Cordless Larry (talk) 15:45, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Please explain why we should take your word as a judgment when WP:WTRMT clearly states this is a How To Guide and gives Rules. Can one editor consider himself the sole authority? Editaddict (talk) 16:05, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Feel free to ask for a second opinion on this. WP:TEAHOUSE would be a good place for you to ask as a novice editor. Cordless Larry (talk) 16:09, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
In the discussion so far about the application of WP:ABOUTSELF in regard to the "Belief" paragraph, it seems to me that a consensus has been reached that the sources used in this paragraph are appropriate and within policy. I have reread this thread a number of times and 3 editors in this thread are fine with the sources, one is not.
I will wait for any further comment. Otherwise, by consensus of arguing policy, I will remove the tag WP:WTRMT (1)(5) XZealous (talk) 15:06, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Consensus isn't judged solely by numbers, but I think you need to take into account the fact that at least some of the editors who wish to see the template removed have a clear conflict of interest. Cordless Larry (talk) 15:46, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Should we limit the article to the period up until the formal disbandment of "International Churches of Christ, Inc." in 2010?[edit]

With all of the discussion about primary sources and the recent commentary about the article being overly long relative to the subject's importance, I decided to take a deeper look into what exactly the legal structure of the ICOC is and how disciplestoday.org relates to that. What I found was:

  • "International Churches of Christ, Inc." was formally disbanded in 2010. An attorney that represented them in the recent federal lawsuits stated in a court filing in 2023 "ICOC, Inc. dissolved in 2010. International Churches of Christ is now an unincorporated association of individuals." (see footnotes on page 3)
  • The trademark "International Churches of Christ" was abandoned in February 2005. This means that anyone is now free to use the trademark "International Churches of Christ".
  • disciplestoday.org has historically identified itself as the "official" publication of the ICOC, but there is nothing on their website now that indicates what legal entity they are and their whois is private. Hence disciplestoday.org is more akin to a self-published blog about the ICOC than an official publication of the ICOC.
  • There has been almost no news coverage about the ICOC since 2010. On newspapers.com (available through wikilibrary), there were 469 US newspaper mentions of the ICOC from 1990 to 2010. From 2010 to the present there were 11. Of those 11, only one was news coverage about the ICOC itself (i.e., the Los Angeles Times coverage of the lawsuits). The other 10 were simply incidental mentions, such as an obituary suggestion of where to send donations to.

In light of all this, I would like to suggest that we state that ICOC, Inc. was formally disbanded in 2010 and the ICOC is now "an unincorporated association of individuals". We can cite their attorney's filing as a reliable primary source that doesn't need any interpretation. We should then limit the article to a description of the ICOC as it was up until 2010. This period is adequately covered by RS and hence is notable. In terms of what the ICOC is today, I suggest we stay strictly within what RS says since the ICOC no longer has a formal structure or an official voice. If/when subsequent RS becomes available discussing the current ICOC (e.g., beliefs, plans, organizational structure, membership etc.) then we can update the article accordingly.

How do other editors feel about this? Nowa (talk) 12:17, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I don't agree with the IP editor that the article length should reflect the subject's importance (importance to who?), except in as far as its "importance" is likely to be reflected in the availability of reliable sources, which does partly influence how detailed an article can be. I also disagree that we should limit coverage to pre-2010; it's not as if the church has ceased to exist. Of course, a lack of reliable sources on the period since 2010 is going to reduce what we can say about that time. Cordless Larry (talk) 14:44, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I think we are in agreement. I wasn't saying that the article was overly long, only that the comment about it being overly long motivated me to take a deeper dive into what exactly the ICOC was. I also agree that the ICOC continues to exist and on this, I stand corrected. I didn't realize that an Unincorporated association was a legal entity. The current Wikipedia article about unincorporated associations focuses on UK law, so I may spend some time adding information about the US. Help in this endeavor would be appreciated. Regarding post 2010 RS, I did overlook the Christian Chronicle article from 2012 that is already cited. I think the Christian Chronicle article is a good example of they type of RS we need to keep the article up-to-date. Nowa (talk) 21:39, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Although note that the the Christian Chronicle was discussed recently at Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard/Archive 431#The Christian Chronicle on the International Churches of Christ and while there weren't many comments, those that were made suggested that it shouldn't be considered reliable. Cordless Larry (talk) 08:21, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I am not sure I agree with that assessment. There was confusion amongst the commentators even understanding the distinction between the Church of Christ and the International Church of Christ, some thinking it was the same organisation. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 09:08, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
We could perhaps do with getting wider input, either through another RSN thread or perhaps an RfC here. Cordless Larry (talk) 09:31, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It seems like we may need that on a number of topics which seem to have ground to a halt.
- Should untried court cases confined to one state in California be included on a page describing a church in over 150 nations? WP:UNDUE
- Is the churches official website a reliable source for stating the churches beliefs? WP:ABOUTSELF
- When criticisms of the church are being published EG:”it is a cult” do we also provide other perspectives that have been published in Reliable Sources, or do we suppress other viewpoints? WP:NPOV JamieBrown2011 (talk) 10:16, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Anyone is welcome to initiate an RfC at any point. Cordless Larry (talk) 10:38, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It seems that the discussion here and on the Christian Chronicle reliability would benefit greatly if the commenters would familiarize themselves with the Restoration Movement and the recognized groups and publications. The WP page on Restoration Movement is very helpful in addition to the pages on the Christian Churches (Churches of Christ), Churches of Christ and the International Churches of Christ. Restoration Movement. In addition the Encyclopedia of the Stone-Campbell Movement is extensive and detailed.
Also the Christian Chronicle long history of winning awards for journalism should be noted. https://christianchronicle.org/christian-chronicle-staff-wins-15-awards-in-oklahoma-society-of-professional-journalists-contest/ Editaddict (talk) 18:07, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The ICOC is a restoration movement? What are they trying to restore? Restore what? 2600:1700:4260:35D0:98FA:4FF1:C7BD:BCE7 (talk) 03:16, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The original church as described in the New Testament. See Restoration Movement. Nowa (talk) 14:20, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Such an important consideration. Whether the page continues past 2010, is placed on pause until a consensus can be reached on the addition of new information about the church or wholly abandoned is an editorial decision that will require consensus. But, it provides context for the current debate about sourcing that shows up in nearly every entry on this Talk page. It is correct that the church continues to exist past 2010, but as a less structured, voluntary collaboration of cooperating churches. The current arrangements for voluntary collaboration, decision-making on areas of common interest and beliefs among congregations are represented by a Cooperation Agreement document and updated governance guidelines are described in great detail in the following link on the Disciples Today website: https://disciplestoday.org/leadership-roles-and-responsibilities/. However, all of the information contained in these sources that could be used to rewrite or update the ICOC article are being held hostage by the current stalemate on interpretations of Wikipedia policies on reliable sources, including “about self” sourcing. In my view, the inclusion of this information should not be delayed until some external author chooses years later to write up these same facts relying on these same sources and publishes them. Instead, I propose that “about self” sourcing be permitted where appropriate and clearly identified in the article that that's what it is.  A review of Wikipedia articles for other denominations reveal that this practice is common. For example, the Catholic Church article relies heavily on the Catechism of the Catholic Church and other publications related to the Catholic Church. Meta Voyager (talk) 17:22, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the link to the cooperation agreement and the sharing of your concerns about the article being held hostage to the the possible coverage of ICOC by RS. As I indicated in my response to Cordless Larry, I didn't realize that an Unincorporated association was a type of legal entity. One of the things I've learned so far is that unincorporated associations are often governed by an agreement amongst their members. The link to the cooperation agreement, therefore, is helpful. The cooperation link had a link to the service teams. The service teams show that "Disciples Today" is, in fact, the official publication of the ICOC. So I withdraw my description of it as a "self-published" blog. Nowa (talk) 21:40, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your suggestions. I do not agree because they are not based in fact.
- International Churches of Christ, Inc. was formally disbanded in 2003. The attorney's quote is wrong in his court filing. Christian Chronicle 2012
- In 2009 a "Plan for United Cooperation" was formed and distributed for churches to create a cooperation basis of relationship instead of a corporate basis. Most all the churches agreed to this. The Christian Churches and the Churches of Christ that also came from the Stone/Campbell movement are also organized without a formal structure. This is not unusual in the religious arena. See Pepperdine University "The ICOC: a Historical Overview" and Encyclopedia of the Stone-Campbell Movement,
- The Leadership Tab of Disciples Today has a thorough description of how they are organized and how their leadership functions according to their cooperation agreement including "About Us", "ICOC Leadership", "ICOC Churches", "Leadership News"
- Disciples Today still identifies themselves as "the communications channel of the International Churches of Christ." They are an official non-profit, are supported by most of the ICOC churches and are recognized by them. They also maintain the official list of churches and regions in the fellowship and a contact list.
- If news coverage was a criteria for every Wiki page, how many of those pages would not exist? Meanwhile, the ICOC page already contains several links to outside sources who comment on the ICOC. Christian Chronicle 2016, 2012, 2005 The Harvard Crimson 2014 Pepperdine University 2010 Encyclopedia of the Stone-Campbell Movement, p 719
- To say that a functioning association of 750 churches in 150 countries does not exist is not honest especially when its history is documented and they have a clear, transparent organization. Editaddict (talk) 21:09, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"The attorney's quote is wrong in his court filing" is a good illustration of why we shouldn't be relying on primary sources. Cordless Larry (talk) 08:54, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your observations. Allow me to address them one by one:
  • The link you gave was to a 2005 Christian Chronicle article. I didn't see anything in that related to dissolution of the corporation. I also checked the 2012 Christian Chronicle article and didn't see anything there either. I did however, check the California Secretary of State web site and they posted the dissolution notice from 2010. You can see a copy here.
  • Thanks for the link to the Plan for United Cooperation and mentioning that "this" (i.e., an unincorporated association) is not unusual. As I indicated in my response to Cordless Larry, I'll be looking into unincorporated associations in more detail.
  • Thanks also for pointing out the leadership tab of Disciples Today. As I indicated in my response to Meta Voyager, I now see that Disciples Today is the official voice of the ICOC.
  • Regarding Disciples Today being an "official nonprofit", I haven't been able to verify that. There is no mention of them being a 501(c)3 on their web site and they are not listed in the IRS database of nonprofits.
  • Regarding my statement that the ICOC "does not exist", as indicated above, I see I was mistaken from the standpoint of it being a legal entity and withdraw my comment.
Nowa (talk) 21:42, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Nowa. Sorry, I was incorrect on the official dissolution date of the ICOC corporation in 2010. I was referring to the dissolution of the organization in 2003. Disciples Today is probably listed as Kingdom News Network for the IRS as that was the predecessor name. They started DBA Disciples Today in 2004. Editaddict (talk) 17:36, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. Yes, Kingdom News Network is in the IRS database as a nonprofit that serves the International Churches of Christ. Roger Lamb is the ex CEO. Nowa (talk) 20:12, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Request for Comment on About Self sourcing on beliefs section of a religious organization’s article[edit]

The following discussion is an archived record of a request for comment. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this discussion. A summary of the conclusions reached follows.
After more than 10 days of posting on the RfC, sufficient information from editors justified a decision to end discussion. Meta Voyager (talk) 15:08, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Wikipedia articles about religious organizations often contain a “beliefs” section that describes the beliefs and practices of the organization and its members. Is About Self sourcing on the organization’s beliefs or practices acceptable as Reliable Sourcing when the information is derived directly from the religious organization or published by an employee or member of the organization irrespective of whether secondary sourcing is available? This RfC assumes that all other Wikipedia editing policies are observed. ~~~~ Meta Voyager (talk) 17:26, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Discussion[edit]

  • No, we should rely on independent, secondary sources as much as possible for this. Some non-independent sourcing might be acceptable here, but per WP:ABOUTSELF, only when the claims concerned are uncontroversial - and given how much controversy surrounds the ICOC and its practices, I'd suggest that not much is uncontroversial here. Cordless Larry (talk) 17:54, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • If it was a staightforward uncontroversial enclyclopedic summary of their beliefs, IMO yes. But for what I see in the article, no because it is not those things. It is prose wordsmith-ed with all of their objectives in mind. North8000 (talk) 20:34, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
BTW by "uncontroversial" I meant as a statement of their beliefs. For example, it is uncontroversial that the flat earth society professes that the earth is flat, even if the belief is controversial.North8000 (talk) 20:37, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@North8000I agree with you about making this section a "straightforward uncontroversial encyclopedic summary of their beliefs". Could you point out what you find as "prose wordsmith-ed?" That should help out with making this section more fitting. XZealous (talk) 08:36, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
My 14:31, 17 April 2024 post below is a first attempt at reflecting on that. North8000 (talk) 15:21, 18 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • For most major religions, this should be fine, but I can think of several high control organisations where what is outwardly claimed about the religion's beliefs doesn't neccesarily match all that well with what is claimed internally, and where external sources might be necessary to get a good perspective, think scientology.--Licks-rocks (talk) 21:20, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Noting that the ICOC is not a prominent enough organization to generate many secondary sources on their beliefs, do you think it is necessary to have these sources as well?
    Also, would an outside perspective of beliefs fit within the "Beliefs" section, or would that garner a whole other section on outside views on the ICOC? There has to be some discrepancy between an internal statement and an outside source's experience of the application of those statements.
    Maybe you can put here on the talk page if you find a big discrepancy between the internal and external statements of belief? XZealous (talk) 08:34, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    It's a bit of a stretch to suggest that the organisation isn't prominent enough to generate coverage when there's an entire scholarly book about it. Cordless Larry (talk) 20:53, 18 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Very much agree with what North8000 has said, for uncontroversial statements it should be fine. However for controversial groups whose believes and practices may not match what they profess publicly such statements may go against points 1 (unduly self-serving) and 4 (reasonable doubt) of WP:ABOUTSELF. -- LCU ActivelyDisinterested «@» °∆t° 23:58, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    It might be helpful to this RFC to explain what is deemed as "controversial" in the beliefs section? JamieBrown2011 (talk) 14:19, 16 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
One of the challenges in editing this article has been that there is very little recent RS published about the ICOC since the early 2000s. This is when its founder resigned/was ousted and they underwent a major reorganization. That reorganization included a very public (although not very specific) renunciation by its leadership of the organization being "too judgmental". So the dilemma, as I see it, is if the article's beliefs section relies primarily on RS, it will be out-of-date, since most RS was generated at a time when the ICOC was more controversial than it is today. If, on the other hand, we want to make the beliefs section current, then there is very little RS available and we have to rely on primary sources with all of the difficulties associated with that. Any thoughts on how to resolve this dilemma? Are there other precedents where the issue of article currency vs the availability of RS was addressed? Nowa (talk) 15:23, 16 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Great point @Nowa, there are some articles written at the Christian Chronicle about those changes and also at Disciples Today. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 13:53, 18 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Is the Christian Chronicle a newsletter/newspaper/news source published by the ICOC? 2600:1700:4260:35D0:98FA:4FF1:C7BD:BCE7 (talk) 02:34, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for the helpful comments received thus far. The origin of this RfC is to improve the article by making thoughtful edits that conform to Wikipedia policies. As further context, for the past 8 months this article has been closely monitored and my attempts to edit have been tightly controlled by the suggestion that I have a conflict of interest as a lay member of the church. I have directly expressed my disagreement on this position with the responsible administrator but have chosen in good faith to confine my suggested edits to the Talk page and use the tools afforded by Wikipedia policy to reach consensus. There is a Statement of Shared Beliefs contained within a self-published Plan For United Cooperation dated March 11, 2006 that is a representation of the belief system of several hundred church congregations who have chosen to participate. In my view, it is non-controversial and similar to other statements of faith appearing in articles for other religious organizations (e.g., Catechism of the Catholic Church). My hope is that this RfC will provide consensus on the appropriateness of making a change of this type (i.e., About Self sourcing) to the article’s belief section. It appears the consensus so far is represented by North8000’s opinion that “a straightforward uncontroversial encyclopedic summary of their beliefs” is permitted. If this consensus holds, the issue of whether the Statement of Shared Beliefs is controversial will have an appropriate airing on the Talk page, prior to posting. Meta Voyager (talk) 15:42, 16 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
That selective quote from North8000's comment makes it sound like they approve of the current state of the section, which I don't believe is the case from reading the full comment. Cordless Larry (talk) 08:06, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I think @Meta Voyager is trying to point out that the consensus is that if the section were to be "a straightforward uncontroversial encyclopedic summary of their beliefs", then the sources should be fine.
It seems like there would be agreement to use these sources if the Belief section were to be simplified in its writing to avoid being "wordsmith-ed." XZealous (talk) 08:22, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have not taken the deep dive to learn enough to say too much. But to make just a quick reading of the quoted portion, it is not very informative for such a large amount words. 95% of it is a just statement of the of the core points of all of the "Primacy of the Bible" churches and organizations with perhaps billions of members. The other 5% is "every member's participation in the Great Commission to Seek and save what was lost" which, by using undefined internal jargon for it's core statement, does not inform the reader at all. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 14:31, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Expanding on my last point, whenever somebody uses undefined jargon which they control the definition of to "explain" something, e.g. "every member's participation in the Great Commission to Seek and save what was lost" I consider it to be problematic. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 21:36, 18 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The other "95%" is covered in the other text in that section. I might boldly zap that whole quote section just to try to help here and request that if anybody disagrees to please revert me. North8000 (talk) 21:59, 18 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for these clarifications on the sections that have been "wordsmithed." My view, as stated elsewhere on the Talk page, is that there are many sections of the article that would benefit from being rewritten and one of the intentions of this RfC is to better understand how to do so consistent with WP editing policies.. Meta Voyager (talk) 22:12, 18 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Just in case my use of the word "wordsmithing" might have been an overreach, I didn't mean it in a negative or manipulative sense. Just that the wording is crafted to serve all of the objectives and constraints of the writers in whatever context they wrote it. Which is different that trying to give a third party enclyclopedic description. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 02:44, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I have not looked at the article, but the RFC question makes me wonder whether editors are remembering that Wikipedia:Secondary does not mean independent.
On the general subject, though, I'm surprised that this question is being asked. Anyone with even a small amount of experience should already know that an encyclopedia article about a religious organization will always outline the organization's beliefs (WP:BALASP policy) and that editors should use the WP:BESTSOURCES available to them. Therefore, if the best sources about the org's religious beliefs are from the org, then use them. And if the best sources are not from the org, then use those. This is not rocket science. WhatamIdoing (talk) 01:16, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for the further clarification on the use of secondary sourcing that is not independent. I agree with this assessment and your acknowledgement that the best available source on a religious organization's beliefs is often times the organization itself. Meta Voyager (talk) 01:49, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
On the wording of the RfC, if it was me posting it, I'd have asked about the suitability of non-independent sources for the beliefs section of this specific article. Cordless Larry (talk) 06:27, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks @WhatamIdoing it makes perfect sense what you are saying, especially the point on secondary sources not always being independent or the best. JamieBrown2011 (talk) 12:18, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
We do generally discourage editors from interpreting the Bible or other religious texts themselves (Wikipedia:Neutral point of view#Religion). A primary source like the organization's website is a safer choice for editors than a primary source like the Bible itself. So primary sources aren't bad, and may sometimes even be best, but they're not always preferred, either. WhatamIdoing (talk) 16:43, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, your input is clear and very helpful 👍 JamieBrown2011 (talk) 18:31, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Since it might be unclear (including what I said about the quote) I agree with what WhatamIdoing said. And they did not respond for the particulars here, they just said that there is no reason to preclude such a source, and that it often may be the best source. What's there now (after I took the quote out) IMO has the appearance of OK, with the caveat that I'm not deep in / knowledgeable enough on the topic/sources to evaluate more deeply than that. North8000 (talk) 12:47, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
When I do a simple google search the search will return hundreds of articles that call this organization a cult. How can I trust that what the ICOC says happens and believes is really what is happening in the ICOC? Maybe the ICOC is lying? 2600:1700:4260:35D0:98FA:4FF1:C7BD:BCE7 (talk) 02:42, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • No (Summoned by bot) we should prefer secondary WP:RS, with a strong preference for academic sources from subject matter experts. WP:ABOUTSELF should only be utilised when there are gaps and then care should be taken to not present the information from ABOUTSELF sources as fact, only as self-attributed claims. TarnishedPathtalk 05:04, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree with you here about the importance of secondary WP:RS The belief section should use WP:ABOUTSELF for the self attributed claims of its own beliefs. I am not sure that WP:ABOUTSELF "should only be utilised when there are gaps." That statement is not within the policy confine of WP:ABOUTSELF. Noting that this section is a statement of ICOC beliefs as stated by the ICOC themselves, it falls within all guidelines to use WP:ABOUTSELF for this section.
    There is also a great discussion of this on Wikipedia talk:Verifiability#RfC concerning WP:ABOUTSELF XZealous (talk) 08:53, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • This RfC has received open comment and discussion for more than 10 days and appears to have achieved a majority view on acceptable uses of About Self sourcing on the beliefs section of a religious organization's article under certain circumstances. To avoid COI concerns and in light of the backlog on Wikipedia Closure requests, I request that @WhatamIdoing, as an editor uninvolved with the article, consider writing a brief closing summary of the discussion on this RfC (ideally with a determination of consensus), after which I intend to formally end the discussion. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Meta Voyager (talkcontribs) 12:52, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    An editor who has contributed to the discussion is involved, so shouldn't be the one to close it and summarise the consensus. Cordless Larry (talk) 17:00, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Objection noted. Since closing summaries are not required, I’ll proceed with ending the discussion. Meta Voyager (talk) 11:53, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes. In case my thanking of disinterested editors for their input hasn't made my position clear. I am supportive of using WP:ABOUTSELF as a reliable source, as was mentioned by @Horse Eyes Back on the Reliable Sources Board over here Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard/Archive 414#Reliability and independence of sources for International Churches of Christ JamieBrown2011 (talk) 13:49, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

For clarity, there are really two questions, and this discussion has really been about #1:

  1. Prohibit vs. do not prohibit using self as a source
  2. Decide that what's there is what will be in the article.

IMO folks have mostly decided "do not prohibit" on #1, but that should not be interpreted as "locking in" what is currently in there. North8000 (talk) 13:58, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Improving Discipling section[edit]

I found a few more RS and am in the process of improving the Discipling section. First step is fixing refs and cleaning up. I removed the quote from Kip McKean since its from an interview in 2004 when he was no longer a spokesperson for the ICOC. The original citation for that quote was to an unrelated Time article. I found the correct source and fixed the reference before removing the quote in case anyone disagrees with the quote removal.

On a related note, there appears to be a number of reference errors in the article. It wouldn't hurt to clean those up. Nowa (talk) 13:11, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I've added the Yi dissertation as RS. This has a lot of information about beliefs. Nowa (talk) 00:16, 21 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your work on this! The "Those who left the ICOC were to be shunned" sentence is based off an interview of Ms. Yun Kim. Is it appropriate to take her statement and solidify it as a practice in the Discipling section? If you want to keep it, I think it should at least be clarified that it is a quote from one person, not representative as a solid practice.
Noting that the interview represents Ms. Yun Kim's either experience or perspective should be noted in the article. WP:BIASED and WP:INTEXT should be noted if you want to keep the statement in the article.
Let me know what you think, thanks! XZealous (talk) 09:28, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
These are good points. The Jenkins reference "Awesome Families"(2005) has a lot more information about the practice of discipling under McKean. I am in the process of reviewing Jenkins now in order to update the article. In the meantime, I'll put in an additional reference about "shunning". Nowa (talk) 12:01, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Nowa for all your work on this, but I think you have overused Yi as a source and currently have 2/3rd of the discipling section attributed entirely to her. Over 300 words, and nothing from the church itself on the practice. WP:BALANCE JamieBrown2011 (talk) 13:53, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Do we still need "The ICOC: 2020 plans" section?[edit]

It seems to me that the plans of the ICOC for 2020 is not particularly notable (i.e., not covered by any RS) and out-of-date. Do we still need it? Nowa (talk) 11:46, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I agree that this section is poor. At the very least, it could do with updating, but given the lack of secondary sources about it, it might not merit inclusion in the first place. Cordless Larry (talk) 18:47, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
So we have a "second" from one editor. If one or two other editors concur, I'll take that as consensus and delete the section. Nowa (talk) 12:08, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not opposed to deleting the section but believe that the entire article suffers from there being few updates about current beliefs and practices. As you've observed in your research there is an ongoing effort at reform in the church that is not able to be recognized by the way the article is currently being administered. I posted the RfC on About Self sourcing in an effort to develop an acceptable process for including more recent events that have limited independent sourcing. I will be posting some suggestions on the Talk page about proposed changes to the Beliefs and Practices section that I hope will be helpful. Thank you for your ongoing efforts to improve the article. Meta Voyager (talk) 21:47, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your input. Sounds like we have consensus to remove the 2020 plans section. I will go ahead and do so. Nowa (talk) 11:27, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]