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Request to update basic facts[edit]

Hello editors, my name is Jessica. I am a representative from Mayo Clinic here to make some suggested improvements to this article both now and in the near future. I hope editors find that these suggestions overall improve Wikipedia. Below, I have a list of basic factual updates that can improve the article.

In the infobox:

  • Update chair to Michael Powell.[1]
  • Update number of employees to 76,000 (2022).[2][3]
  • This fact sheet is currently cited in the infobox already, but the citation needed to be updated and reformatted, so I have done that here.
  • Update revenue to $16.3 billion (2022).[2][3]

In the Corporate affairs section:

  • Replace "Samuel A. DiPiazza, Jr., retired CEO of PricewaterhouseCoopers, is chairman of Mayo Clinic's governing board of trustees." with "Michael Powell, former chair of the Federal Communications Commission, is chair of Mayo Clinic's governing board of trustees.[1]"
  • Replace "Mayo Clinic employs 63,000 people, including more than 4,500 physicians and scientists and 58,400 administrative and allied health staff, as of 2018." with "Mayo Clinic employs 76,000 people, including more than 7,300 physicians and clinical residents and over 66,000 allied health staff, as of 2022."[3]"
  • Delete the sentence "Of those, approximately 34,000 are based in Rochester." The sentence is written like it is current but this is outdated information and I suggest removal.

References

  1. ^ a b Pyrek, Emily Pyrek (20 February 2021). "Mayo Clinic ranked one of Forbes' Best Large Employers, new Mayo Board of Trustees chair named". La Crosse Tribune. Archived from the original on 21 February 2021. Retrieved 18 September 2023.
  2. ^ a b Muoio, Dave. "The top 10 nonprofit health systems by 2022 operating revenue". Fierce Healthcare. Retrieved 18 September 2023.
  3. ^ a b c "2022 Mayo Clinic Highlights" (PDF). Mayo Clinic. Retrieved 19 September 2023.

I am happy to answer any questions here. Thanks JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 18:23, 20 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Seems reasonable. Thank you for a well thought-out and factual contribution! Bestagon ⬡ 19:02, 20 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you! JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 13:42, 26 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
2023 financials are in. Should revenue be updated to 17.9B? Ram20066 (talk) 16:41, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Request to Update Core Operations section[edit]

Hi, I would like to make more suggested improvements to this article, this time to the Core Operations section and its subsequent three subsections. I hope editors find that these suggestions overall improve Wikipedia.

In the Clinical practice subsection:

  • Update the opening sentence from "In 2018, more than 1.2 million different patients from all 50 states and 138 countries were seen at Mayo Clinic facilities." to "In 2022, more than 1.3 million different patients from all 50 states and 138 countries were seen at Mayo Clinic facilities.[1]"
  • Remove "Mayo Clinic offers highly specialized medical care, and a large portion of the patient population are referrals from smaller clinics and hospitals across the upper Midwest and the United States."
  • This is due to a lack of sourcing attached to the sentence
  • Add "Mayo Clinic pledged $100 million over 10 years toward eliminating bias in medicine, providing equity, and diversifying leadership.[2]"
  • Add "Specialized care areas at Mayo Clinic include ovarian cancer, colon cancer, congenital heart disease, glioma, heart failure, aortic valve surgery, and prostate cancer.[3]"

In the Research subsection:

  • Update "As of 2018, research personnel included 254 full-time scientific faculty, 766 physicians actively involved in research, and 4,027 full-time research personnel. In 2018, the institutional review board approved 3,067 new human research studies and 12,760 ongoing studies." to "As of 2022, research personnel included about 5,500 physicians and scientists.[4]"
  • Add "Mayo Clinic's 2022 research funding exceeded $1 billion.[5]"
  • Add "In 2019, two Mayo Clinic doctors started a biotech firm through Mayo Clinic's Employee Entrepreneurship Program at One Discovery Square complex in downtown Rochester, which Mayo Clinic anchors and leases out.[6]"
  • Add "In 2020, Mayo Clinic launched the federally sponsored Expanded Access Program for Convalescent Plasma, which reached over 70,000 hospitalized patients with COVID-19 across the United States.[7]"
  • Add "In September 2023, Mayo Clinic in Florida opened its Community Health Collaborative in Downtown Jacksonville. This location is for researchers to conduct community health education and clinical trial participation outreach and the Mayo Clinic will not provide medical care at the location.[8]"

In the Education section:

  • In this section, rather than prose in a sentence for each school, I am suggesting rearranging it into a list, which can be seen below in the draft.
  • Add "Mayo Foundation for Medical Education and Research was incorporated in 1915 from an endowment of $1.5 million from the personal funds of brothers William J. Mayo, M.D. and Charles H. Mayo, M.D.[9]"
  • Add "Also in that year, the Mayo Foundation expanded its three-year post graduate program through a partnership with the University of Minnesota.[9]"
  • Add "In 1972, the medical school opened.[10]"

References

  1. ^ "2022 Mayo Clinic Highlights" (PDF). Mayo Clinic. Retrieved 19 September 2023.
  2. ^ Pyrek, Emily Pyrek (7 April 2023). "U.S. maternal mortality rates increased in 2021, far surpass that of other wealthy countries". La Crosse Tribune. Archived from the original on 9 April 2023. Retrieved 31 August 2023.
  3. ^ "Mayo Clinic". U.S. News & World Report. Retrieved 28 September 2023.
  4. ^ Brownell, Andy BrownellAndy (27 February 2023). "Mayo Clinic 2022 Expenses up $1 Billion - Net Income Dropped 53%". News Talk 1340 KROC-AM. Retrieved 31 August 2023.
  5. ^ Brownell, Andy BrownellAndy (27 February 2023). "Mayo Clinic 2022 Expenses up $1 Billion - Net Income Dropped 53%". News Talk 1340 KROC-AM. Retrieved 31 August 2023.
  6. ^ Kiger, Jeff (10 October 2019). "Mayo Clinic-spawned biotech firm opening lab in One Discovery Square". Rochester Post Bulletin. Retrieved 7 September 2023.
  7. ^ Treisman, Rachel (23 August 2020). "FDA Authorizes Convalescent Plasma As Emergency Treatment For COVID-19". NPR. Retrieved 7 September 2023.
  8. ^ Palombo, Jessica (12 September 2023). "Mayo Clinic in Florida opens Downtown Jacksonville site focused on education, research". Jacksonville Today. Retrieved 29 September 2023.
  9. ^ a b Fye, W. Bruce (Fall 2010). "PRESIDENTIAL ADDRESS: The Origins and Evolution of the Mayo Clinic from 1864 to 1939: A Minnesota Family Practice Becomes an International "Medical Mecca" on JSTOR". www.jstor.org. 84 (3): 323-357. Retrieved 6 September 2023.
  10. ^ "History of Mayo Clinic". The Post-Bulletin. September 27, 2013. Retrieved 4 October 2018.
Extended content

Clinical practice
In 2022, more than 1.3 million different patients from all 50 states and 138 countries were seen at Mayo Clinic facilities.[1] Mayo Clinic physicians are paid a fixed salary, which is not linked to patient volume (relative value units) or income from fee-for-service payments.[2][3][4] This practice is thought to decrease the monetary motivation to see patients in excessive numbers and increase the incentive to spend more time with patients.[2]

Mayo Clinic pledged $100 million over 10 years toward eliminating bias in medicine, providing equity, and diversifying leadership.[5]

Specialized care areas at Mayo Clinic include ovarian cancer, colon cancer, congenital heart disease, glioma, heart failure, aortic valve surgery, and prostate cancer.[6]


Research
Mayo Clinic researchers contribute to understanding disease processes, best clinical practices, and translating findings from the laboratory to clinical practice. As of 2022, research personnel included about 5,500 physicians and scientists.[7] In recent years, 100% of Mayo Clinic's internal medicine residents across the three campuses have published research during their tenure.

Mayo Clinic's 2022 research funding exceeded $1 billion.[8]

In 2019, two Mayo Clinic doctors started a biotech firm through Mayo Clinic's Employee Entrepreneurship Program at One Discovery Square complex in downtown Rochester, which Mayo Clinic anchors and leases out.[9]

In 2020, Mayo Clinic launched the federally sponsored Expanded Access Program for Convalescent Plasma, which reached over 70,000 hospitalized patients with COVID-19 across the United States.[10]

In September 2023, Mayo Clinic in Florida opened its Community Health Collaborative in Downtown Jacksonville. This location is for researchers to conduct community health education and clinical trial participation outreach and the Mayo Clinic will not provide medical care at the location.[11]

Education

Main article: Mayo Clinic College of Medicine and Science

The Mayo Clinic College of Medicine and Science (MCCMS), established in 1915,[12] offers educational programs embedded in Mayo Clinic's clinical practice and biomedical research activities.[13] MCCMS consists of five accredited schools:

Mayo Foundation for Medical Education and Research was incorporated in 1915 from an endowment of $1.5 million from the personal funds of brothers William J. Mayo, M.D. and Charles H. Mayo, M.D.[17] Also in that year, the Mayo Foundation expanded its three-year post graduate program through a partnership with the University of Minnesota.[17] In 1972, the medical school opened.[18]

References

  1. ^ "2022 Mayo Clinic Highlights" (PDF). Mayo Clinic. Retrieved 19 September 2023.
  2. ^ a b Underwood, Anne (23 September 2009). "A new way to pay physicians". The New York Times. Retrieved 30 January 2018.
  3. ^ MacGillis, Alex; Stein, Rob (20 September 2009). "Is the Mayo Clinic a model or a mirage? The jury is still out". The Washington Post. Retrieved 30 January 2018.
  4. ^ Olson, Jeremy (23 April 2015). "Mayo faces new price of success". Star Tribune. Retrieved 30 January 2018.
  5. ^ Pyrek, Emily Pyrek (7 April 2023). "U.S. maternal mortality rates increased in 2021, far surpass that of other wealthy countries". La Crosse Tribune. Archived from the original on 9 April 2023. Retrieved 31 August 2023.
  6. ^ "Mayo Clinic". U.S. News & World Report. Retrieved 28 September 2023.
  7. ^ Brownell, Andy BrownellAndy (27 February 2023). "Mayo Clinic 2022 Expenses up $1 Billion - Net Income Dropped 53%". News Talk 1340 KROC-AM. Retrieved 31 August 2023.
  8. ^ Brownell, Andy BrownellAndy (27 February 2023). "Mayo Clinic 2022 Expenses up $1 Billion - Net Income Dropped 53%". News Talk 1340 KROC-AM. Retrieved 31 August 2023.
  9. ^ Kiger, Jeff (10 October 2019). "Mayo Clinic-spawned biotech firm opening lab in One Discovery Square". Rochester Post Bulletin. Retrieved 7 September 2023.
  10. ^ Treisman, Rachel (23 August 2020). "FDA Authorizes Convalescent Plasma As Emergency Treatment For COVID-19". NPR. Retrieved 7 September 2023.
  11. ^ Palombo, Jessica (12 September 2023). "Mayo Clinic in Florida opens Downtown Jacksonville site focused on education, research". Jacksonville Today. Retrieved 29 September 2023.
  12. ^ "Facts and Statistics". Mayo Clinic College of Medicine & Science.
  13. ^ "Mayo Clinic College of Medicine and Science". Mayo Clinic.
  14. ^ "Mayo Clinic Facts". Mayo Clinic. Retrieved 4 September 2020.
  15. ^ "Mayo Clinic School of Graduate Medical Education".
  16. ^ Boes, CJ; Long, TR; Rose, SH; Fye, WB (February 2015). "The founding of the Mayo School of Graduate Medical Education". Mayo Clinic Proceedings. 90 (2): 252–63. doi:10.1016/j.mayocp.2014.12.008. PMID 25659241.
  17. ^ a b Fye, W. Bruce (Fall 2010). "PRESIDENTIAL ADDRESS: The Origins and Evolution of the Mayo Clinic from 1864 to 1939: A Minnesota Family Practice Becomes an International "Medical Mecca" on JSTOR". www.jstor.org. 84 (3): 323-357. Retrieved 6 September 2023.
  18. ^ "History of Mayo Clinic". The Post-Bulletin. September 27, 2013. Retrieved 4 October 2018.

I will not post these updates directly due to my conflict of interest. Please contact me for any thoughts or questions, thank you JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 15:42, 12 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 13-OCT-2023[edit]

Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request.

Edit request review 13-OCT-2023

In 2022, more than 1.3 million different patients from all 50 states and 138 countries were seen at Mayo Clinic facilities.
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Remove "Mayo Clinic offers highly specialized medical care, and a large portion of the patient population are referrals from smaller clinics and hospitals across the upper Midwest and the United States."
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Mayo Clinic pledged $100 million over 10 years toward eliminating bias in medicine, providing equity, and diversifying leadership.
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Specialized care areas at Mayo Clinic include ovarian cancer, colon cancer, congenital heart disease, glioma, heart failure, aortic valve surgery, and prostate cancer.
no Declined.[note 2]


As of 2022, research personnel included about 5,500 physicians and scientists
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two Mayo Clinic doctors started a biotech firm through Mayo Clinic's Employee Entrepreneurship Program at One Discovery Square complex in downtown Rochester, which Mayo Clinic anchors and leases out. In 2020, Mayo Clinic launched the federally sponsored Expanded Access Program for Convalescent Plasma, which reached over 70,000 hospitalized patients with COVID-19 across the United States. In September 2023, Mayo Clinic in Florida opened its Community Health Collaborative in Downtown Jacksonville. This location is for researchers to conduct community health education and clinical trial participation outreach and the Mayo Clinic will not provide medical care at the location.
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Mayo Clinic's 2022 research funding exceeded $1 billion
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Mayo Foundation for Medical Education and Research was incorporated in 1915 from an endowment of $1.5 million from the personal funds of brothers William J. Mayo, M.D. and Charles H. Mayo, M.D. Also in that year, the Mayo Foundation expanded its three-year post graduate program through a partnership with the University of Minnesota
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In 1972, the medical school opened.
Clarification needed.[note 5]


rather than prose in a sentence for each school, I am suggesting rearranging it into a list,
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  1. ^ This information includes elements from the future ("over 10 years"). (See WP:CRYSTALBALL.)
  2. ^ It is not the purpose of the Wikipedia article to discuss the Clinic's specialty areas. This information would be better handled being placed on the Clinic's website. A link to that website is already available on the Clinic's Wikipedia page for readers of the article to peruse if they so desire.
  3. ^ The Mayo Clinic Employee Entrepreneurship Program, the Expanded Access Program for Convalescent Plasma, and the Community Health Collaborative are not independently notable in Wikipedia.
  4. ^ The provided source for these claims is 34 pages long. The particular page where this information exists in that source was not provided with the request; surely the COI editor does not intend the reviewer to read 34 pages in order to verify this information. Additionally, the Mayo Foundation for Medical Education and Research does not appear to be independently notable.
  5. ^ It is not known which medical school this claim represents.

Regards,  Spintendo  23:13, 13 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Reply to Spintendo[edit]

Spintendo: Thank you for reviewing and making the improvements you've made thus far. Below are suggestions for a few items you declined – and one question for you.

  • "Mayo Clinic pledged $100 million over 10 years toward eliminating bias in medicine, providing equity, and diversifying leadership."
    • Reason for decline: "This information includes elements from the future ('over 10 years')."
      • Mayo Clinic reply: Would you consider adding the sentence if we omit "over 10 years", since the pledge itself did happen.
        • Mayo Clinic suggestion: "Mayo Clinic pledged $100 million toward eliminating bias in medicine, providing equity, and diversifying leadership.[1]"
  • "In 2019, two Mayo Clinic doctors started a biotech firm through Mayo Clinic's Employee Entrepreneurship Program at One Discovery Square complex in downtown Rochester, which Mayo Clinic anchors and leases out. In 2020, Mayo Clinic launched the federally sponsored Expanded Access Program for Convalescent Plasma, which reached over 70,000 hospitalized patients with COVID-19 across the United States. In September 2023, Mayo Clinic in Florida opened its Community Health Collaborative in Downtown Jacksonville. This location is for researchers to conduct community health education and clinical trial participation outreach and the Mayo Clinic will not provide medical care at the location."
    • Reason for decline: The Mayo Clinic Employee Entrepreneurship Program, the Expanded Access Program for Convalescent Plasma, and the Community Health Collaborative are not independently notable in Wikipedia.
      • Mayo Clinic reply: It is my understanding that things do not have to be notable to be added to an existing article, but they should be verifiable in independent reliable sources. After seeing this feedback, I looked at the notability rules, which say the "criteria applied to the creation or retention of an article are not the same as those applied to the content inside it. The notability guideline does not apply to the contents of articles." The content I suggested cites reliable sources, including The Post Bulletin, NPR, and Jacksonville Today. Will you help me understand why this is insufficient?
  • "Mayo Foundation for Medical Education and Research was incorporated in 1915 from an endowment of $1.5 million from the personal funds of brothers William J. Mayo, M.D. and Charles H. Mayo, M.D. Also in that year, the Mayo Foundation expanded its three-year post graduate program through a partnership with the University of Minnesota"
    • Reason for decline: "The provided source for these claims is 34 pages long. The particular page where this information exists in that source was not provided with the request; surely the COI editor does not intend the reviewer to read 34 pages in order to verify this information. Additionally, the Mayo Foundation for Medical Education and Research does not appear to be independently notable."
      • Mayo Clinic reply: I have updated the citations here to specify which pages verify the information
        • Mayo Clinic suggestion: "Mayo Foundation for Medical Education and Research was incorporated in 1915 from an endowment of $1.5 million from the personal funds of brothers William J. Mayo, M.D. and Charles H. Mayo, M.D.[2]: 344–346  Also in that year, the Mayo Foundation expanded its three-year post graduate program through a partnership with the University of Minnesota.[2]: 343 "
  • "In 1972, the medical school opened."
    • Reason for decline: "It is not known which medical school this claim represents."
      • Mayo Clinic reply: At the time, it was called Mayo Medical School. The school is now Mayo Clinic Alix School of Medicine. Revised text below.
        • Mayo Clinic suggestion: "In 1972, the Mayo Medical School (now Mayo Clinic Alix School of Medicine) opened.[3]"

References

  1. ^ Pyrek, Emily Pyrek (7 April 2023). "U.S. maternal mortality rates increased in 2021, far surpass that of other wealthy countries". La Crosse Tribune. Archived from the original on 9 April 2023. Retrieved 31 August 2023.
  2. ^ a b Fye, W. Bruce (Fall 2010). "PRESIDENTIAL ADDRESS: The Origins and Evolution of the Mayo Clinic from 1864 to 1939: A Minnesota Family Practice Becomes an International "Medical Mecca" on JSTOR". www.jstor.org. 84 (3). Retrieved 6 September 2023.
  3. ^ "History of Mayo Clinic". The Post-Bulletin. September 27, 2013. Retrieved 4 October 2018.

Thank you. JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 20:16, 19 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 19-OCT-2023[edit]

  1. The information regarding the pledge is still future information, regardless of how it is reworded.
  2. With respect to the non-notable companies, what the reviewer is asking for here is not due to WP:N (which is not a content requirement). In this instance, the request for notability is to ensure a neutral point of view. The association of a main organization (Mayo) with another company (the biotech firms) represents a point of view, in that it effectively ascribes to the associated company the relative value and importance of its association according to the main organization's point of view (i.e., "Because we thought it was important-enough to associate ourselves with them, that makes it important-enough to mention in the article."). If the associated companies were independently notable, that would add weight to the main organization's view that their association was important enough to be mentioned in the article. Otherwise, adding to an article several points of view on associations with non-notable companies may upset an article's balancing aspects.[1] Thus, this reviewer's own practice is to limit the listing of associations to those which are independently notable in Wikipedia.
  3. The requested text proposed to be placed under the Education section appears to mirror information already included under the Educational programs section. Before more text is added, please clarify whether there is any overlap.

References

  1. ^ "WP:BALASP". Wikipedia. 16 July 2023. An article should not give undue weight to minor aspects of its subject. A description of isolated events or news reports related to a subject may be verifiable and impartial, but still disproportionate to their overall significance to the article topic.

Regards,  Spintendo  21:02, 19 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Spintendo Thank you for the detailed responses. To answer one question you had, the details are similar however what I presented provides more information including where the endowment came from and the expansion of the three-year post graduate program.
I also do not see your verdict on my updated suggestion: "In 1972, the Mayo Medical School (now Mayo Clinic Alix School of Medicine) opened.[1]

References

  1. ^ {{cite news |title=History of Mayo Clinic |url=https://www.postbulletin.com/news/local/history-of-mayo-clinic/article_7e94f986-e6d8-5163-98c3-f9e4562277f4.html |newspaper=The Post-Bulletin |date=September 27, 2013 |access-date=4 October 2018}
Thank you JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 13:17, 26 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
With regards to your first reply To answer one question you had, the details are similar however what I presented provides more information including where the endowment came from and the expansion of the three-year post graduate program. I would prefer that we have the article containing one section where this is mentioned but with not a lot of detail, as opposed to having two sections as you've proposed. If you'd like your newer, more complete section added, then the other section needs to be proposed for deletion here on the talk page. In 1972, the Mayo Medical School (now Mayo Clinic Alix School of Medicine) opened. If we could get a Wikilink for the Alix school that would be helpful. When ready to proceed, please change the answer parameter from yes to no. Regards,  Spintendo  23:26, 26 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Spintendo, I would like to make the following requests based on your above suggestions:
  • To the Education subsection of the Core Operations section, add "Mayo Foundation for Medical Education and Research was incorporated in 1915 from an endowment of $1.5 million from the personal funds of brothers William J. Mayo, M.D. and Charles H. Mayo, M.D.[1]: 344–346  Also in that year, the Mayo Foundation expanded its three-year post graduate program through a partnership with the University of Minnesota.[1]: 343 "
    • In the Educational programs subsection, remove "The first medical, educational programs at Mayo Clinic were developed in 1915 with the assistance of the University of Minnesota.[2][3] Mayo Clinic School of Graduate Medical Education and the Mayo Foundation for Medical Education and Research were established in 1915.[4][5] MFMER was established as a department of the University of Minnesota with a $1.5 million donation to offer graduate programs at the Mayo Clinic in Rochester.[6]"
    • In the Educational programs subsection, remove the word "now" from the following sentence: "The Mayo Clinic School of Graduate Medical Education is now part of the Mayo Clinic College of Medicine and Science, which is divided into five schools.[7][8]"
Please let me know your thoughts on this, thanks JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 15:20, 1 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ a b Fye, W. Bruce (Fall 2010). "PRESIDENTIAL ADDRESS: The Origins and Evolution of the Mayo Clinic from 1864 to 1939: A Minnesota Family Practice Becomes an International "Medical Mecca" on JSTOR". www.jstor.org. 84 (3). Retrieved 6 September 2023.
  2. ^ Kennedy, William. "History of Medicine in the St. Paul-Minneapolis Metropolitan area". Kennedy Laboratory at the University of Minnesota. University of Minnesota Neurology Department. Retrieved 9 July 2018.
  3. ^ Rogers, Karen (January 1, 2011). Medicine and Healers Through History. Britannica Educational Publishing. p. 200. ISBN 9781615304059. In 1919 the Mayo Brothers transferred property and capital to the Mayo Properties Association, later called the Mayo Foundation, a charitable and educational corporation having a perpetual charter. ...In 1915 the Mayo Brothers gave $1.5 million to the University of Minnesota to establish the Mayo Foundation for Medical Education and Research at Rochester in connection with the clinic. The foundation, part of the University of Minnesota Graduate School, offers graduate training in medicine and related subjects.
  4. ^ Boes, CJ; Long, TR; Rose, SH; Fye, WB (February 2015). "The founding of the Mayo School of Graduate Medical Education". Mayo Clinic Proceedings. 90 (2): 252–63. doi:10.1016/j.mayocp.2014.12.008. PMID 25659241.
  5. ^ "Review: Sketch of the History of the Mayo Clinic and the Mayo Foundation". The Indian Medical Gazette. 2 (63): 105–106. February 1, 1928. PMC 5235446.
  6. ^ Wilson, Louis B.; Sanford, A. H. (September 1920). "The Mayo Foundation for Medical Education and Research". Sigma Xi Quarterly. 8 (3): 52–58. JSTOR 27824137.
  7. ^ Porter, Barbara L.; Grande, Joseph P. (2010). "Mayo Medical School". Academic Medicine. 85 (9): S300-4. doi:10.1097/ACM.0b013e3181e9155c. ISSN 1040-2446. PMID 20736572.
  8. ^ Warner, MA (March 2014). "You trained at Mayo Clinic? Wow!". Mayo Clinic Proceedings. 89 (3): 284–90. doi:10.1016/j.mayocp.2013.09.017. PMID 24582187.
  9. ^ "History of Mayo Clinic". The Post-Bulletin. September 27, 2013. Retrieved 4 October 2018.
no Declined Reasons were not provided with the request. These reasons should be provided for each change requested.[1]

References

  1. ^ "Template:Edit COI". Wikipedia. 30 August 2023. Instructions for Submitters: If the rationale for a change is not obvious (particularly for proposed deletions), explain.
Regards,  Spintendo  21:21, 6 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Updated request[edit]

I would like to make the following request:

  • To the Education subsection of the Core Operations section, add "Mayo Foundation for Medical Education and Research was incorporated in 1915 from an endowment of $1.5 million from the personal funds of brothers William J. Mayo, M.D. and Charles H. Mayo, M.D.[1]: 344–346  Also in that year, the Mayo Foundation expanded its three-year post graduate program through a partnership with the University of Minnesota.[1]: 343 "
    • In the Educational programs subsection of the History section, remove "The first medical, educational programs at Mayo Clinic were developed in 1915 with the assistance of the University of Minnesota.[2][3] Mayo Clinic School of Graduate Medical Education and the Mayo Foundation for Medical Education and Research were established in 1915.[4][5] MFMER was established as a department of the University of Minnesota with a $1.5 million donation to offer graduate programs at the Mayo Clinic in Rochester.[6]"
    • In the Educational programs subsection, remove the word "now" from the following sentence: "The Mayo Clinic School of Graduate Medical Education is now part of the Mayo Clinic College of Medicine and Science, which is divided into five schools.[7][8]
  • My rationale for requesting to add the above content is to provide more information on where the endowment came from and include information on the three-year post graduate program. The content I'm seeking to remove would then reduce redundancy in the article following the new additions.

I would like to additionally make a second request:

  • My rationale for requesting to add this is because it is not currently in the article and provides valuable information to the timeline of Mayo Clinic's history in the late 20th century.

Please let me know your thoughts on this, thanks JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 13:34, 10 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ a b Fye, W. Bruce (Fall 2010). "PRESIDENTIAL ADDRESS: The Origins and Evolution of the Mayo Clinic from 1864 to 1939: A Minnesota Family Practice Becomes an International "Medical Mecca" on JSTOR". www.jstor.org. 84 (3). Retrieved 6 September 2023.
  2. ^ Kennedy, William. "History of Medicine in the St. Paul-Minneapolis Metropolitan area". Kennedy Laboratory at the University of Minnesota. University of Minnesota Neurology Department. Retrieved 9 July 2018.
  3. ^ Rogers, Karen (January 1, 2011). Medicine and Healers Through History. Britannica Educational Publishing. p. 200. ISBN 9781615304059. In 1919 the Mayo Brothers transferred property and capital to the Mayo Properties Association, later called the Mayo Foundation, a charitable and educational corporation having a perpetual charter. ...In 1915 the Mayo Brothers gave $1.5 million to the University of Minnesota to establish the Mayo Foundation for Medical Education and Research at Rochester in connection with the clinic. The foundation, part of the University of Minnesota Graduate School, offers graduate training in medicine and related subjects.
  4. ^ Boes, CJ; Long, TR; Rose, SH; Fye, WB (February 2015). "The founding of the Mayo School of Graduate Medical Education". Mayo Clinic Proceedings. 90 (2): 252–63. doi:10.1016/j.mayocp.2014.12.008. PMID 25659241.
  5. ^ "Review: Sketch of the History of the Mayo Clinic and the Mayo Foundation". The Indian Medical Gazette. 2 (63): 105–106. February 1, 1928. PMC 5235446.
  6. ^ Wilson, Louis B.; Sanford, A. H. (September 1920). "The Mayo Foundation for Medical Education and Research". Sigma Xi Quarterly. 8 (3): 52–58. JSTOR 27824137.
  7. ^ Porter, Barbara L.; Grande, Joseph P. (2010). "Mayo Medical School". Academic Medicine. 85 (9): S300-4. doi:10.1097/ACM.0b013e3181e9155c. ISSN 1040-2446. PMID 20736572.
  8. ^ Warner, MA (March 2014). "You trained at Mayo Clinic? Wow!". Mayo Clinic Proceedings. 89 (3): 284–90. doi:10.1016/j.mayocp.2013.09.017. PMID 24582187.
  9. ^ "History of Mayo Clinic". The Post-Bulletin. September 27, 2013. Retrieved 4 October 2018.

Reply 11-NOV-2023[edit]

✅  Edit request partially implemented  

  1. Red XN The information regarding Mayo Foundation for Medical Education and Research was not moved to the Education subsection of the Core Operations section. This information, which speaks about Mayo's history, belongs in the History section.
  2. Green tickY The word "now" was removed.
  3. Red XN The information concerning Alix school of medicine, as it mentions the opening in 1972, is more apropos to reside somewhere in the History section.

Regards,  Spintendo  23:48, 11 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the response, Spintendo. I see what you mean about placement in the History section versus the Education subsection. Taking this into account, here is what I propose instead:

  • My suggested placement is under the Growth and national expansion subsection of the History section, specifically in order to keep with chronology, I think it should be after the sentence that reads "Following World War II, Mayo Clinic continued to expand in Rochester, Minnesota." and before the sentence that reads "The 1980s initiated transformative changes that set the course for the modern Mayo Clinic"
  • My rationale for requesting to add this is because it is not currently in the article and provides valuable information to the timeline of Mayo Clinic's history in the late 20th century.

Please let me know your thoughts on this, thanks JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 15:13, 15 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ "History of Mayo Clinic". The Post-Bulletin. September 27, 2013. Retrieved 4 October 2018.

 Implemented  Spintendo  02:42, 17 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Contributions to medicine and science[edit]

Hi, Jessica here. I have some additional thoughts on this article and ways it can be improved, outlined below. This is all strictly content addition proposals and none of the existing content should need to be edited or removed from the article with these proposals.

Add each of the following bullet points to the very end of the "Contributions to medicine and science" subsection of the "History" in the order I have presented them (in order to maintain chronology and keep with Wikipedia standards). I think these additions each are appropriate for the "Contributions to medicine and science" subsection and should be added as they provide more information and context to that section:

  • In 2018, Mayo Clinic collaborated with UCLA to help a man paralyzed since 2013 stand and walk with assistance, using spinal cord stimulation and physical therapy. The results were published in the journal Nature Medicine.[1]
  • Launched in 2020, Mayo Clinic's Advanced Care at Home Model of Care provides at home for patients who otherwise would be hospitalized.[2]
  • In 2020, Mayo Clinic launched the federally sponsored Expanded Access Program for Convalescent Plasma, which reached over 70,000 hospitalized patients with COVID-19 across the United States.[3]
  • Mayo Clinic Phoenix performed the most transplants out of anywhere in the United States in 2022 after it had over 800 solid organs.[4]
  • As of 2023, Mayo Clinic treated over 6,000 patients with proton beam therapy and an additional 4,000 patients at a second facility. [5]

References

  1. ^ Eileen, Drage O'Reilly. "Paralyzed man able to walk with assistance in clinical trial". Axios. Retrieved 29 September 2023.
  2. ^ Smits, Garry. "Coronavirus: Mayo Clinic launches advanced care at home in July". The Florida Times-Union. Retrieved 29 September 2023.
  3. ^ Treisman, Rachel (23 August 2020). "FDA Authorizes Convalescent Plasma As Emergency Treatment For COVID-19". NPR. Retrieved 7 September 2023.
  4. ^ Bennett, Stephanie (25 April 2023). "Groundbreaking transplants at Mayo Clinic help save people's lives: Here are their stories". FOX 10 Phoenix. Retrieved 6 September 2023.
  5. ^ Dené, Dryden (22 September 2023). "With expansion on the way, Mayo Clinic's proton beam therapy program aims to treat as many patients as possible". Rochester Post Bulletin. Archived from the original on 28 September 2023. Retrieved 29 September 2023.

I am happy to answer any questions editors might have JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 17:31, 22 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, not here to answer your COI edit request, just offering a comment. Wikipedia generally does not like bulleted lists and instead prefers to write content in prose, for the sake of readability. Additionally these additions have a promotional tone and does not look like content that would help with the article in the large scope of things. WanderingMorpheme 00:33, 23 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@WanderingMorpheme I agree that the content here is promotional in nature and that the addition of it would not add much to the article information wise. Regards,  Spintendo  04:27, 23 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
WanderingMorpheme and Spintendo Thanks for the feedback and sorry for the confusion, I meant that the below should be added as prose, the bullet points were simply for organization on the Talk page. I have removed them for clarity. Additionally, I see what you are saying about promotional language so I have made amendments. To reiterate, this is all strictly content addition proposals and none of the existing content should need to be edited or removed from the article with these proposals.
Add each of the following bullet points to the very end of the "Contributions to medicine and science" subsection of the "History" in the order I have presented them (in order to maintain chronology and keep with Wikipedia standards). I think these additions each are appropriate for the "Contributions to medicine and science" subsection and should be added as they provide more information and context to that section:
In 2018, Mayo Clinic and UCLA used spinal cord stimulation and physical therapy that resulted in a man paralyzed since 2013 regaining the ability to stand and walk with assistance. The results were published in the journal Nature Medicine.[1]
Mayo Clinic's Advanced Care at Home Model of Care launched in 2020 and assists with patient housing.[2]
In 2020, Mayo Clinic launched the federally sponsored Expanded Access Program for Convalescent Plasma for hospitalized patients with COVID-19 in the United States.[3]
In 2022, Mayo Clinic Phoenix performed the most transplants out of anywhere in the United States.[4]
As of 2023, Mayo Clinic treated over 6,000 patients with proton beam therapy and an additional 4,000 patients at a second facility. [5]

References

  1. ^ Eileen, Drage O'Reilly. "Paralyzed man able to walk with assistance in clinical trial". Axios. Retrieved 29 September 2023.
  2. ^ Smits, Garry. "Coronavirus: Mayo Clinic launches advanced care at home in July". The Florida Times-Union. Retrieved 29 September 2023.
  3. ^ Treisman, Rachel (23 August 2020). "FDA Authorizes Convalescent Plasma As Emergency Treatment For COVID-19". NPR. Retrieved 7 September 2023.
  4. ^ Bennett, Stephanie (25 April 2023). "Groundbreaking transplants at Mayo Clinic help save people's lives: Here are their stories". FOX 10 Phoenix. Retrieved 6 September 2023.
  5. ^ Dené, Dryden (22 September 2023). "With expansion on the way, Mayo Clinic's proton beam therapy program aims to treat as many patients as possible". Rochester Post Bulletin. Archived from the original on 28 September 2023. Retrieved 29 September 2023.
I am happy to keep answering questions! JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 15:43, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I don't want to speak for WanderingMorpheme, but I believe what they were saying was that (a) bullet points were generally not accommodated as well as prose was and (b) that Additionally these additions have a promotional tone and does not look like content that would help with the article in the large scope of things meaning prose or no prose they were too promotional sounding for acceptability, in which case, I concurred. Regards,  Spintendo  04:22, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the explanation Spintendo! My newest request amended language in an attempt to alleviate some of those concerns regarding promotional language. WanderingMorpheme: Is the amended language an improvement? Is it possible to evaluate these on a case by case basis too and see if some of the prose meets standards?
Thanks to you both for helping me with improving this content JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 14:15, 5 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I don't see any amended language. If this is a new request, please place it and the template under a new level 2 heading. Regards,  Spintendo  03:21, 6 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Amended language[edit]

Hi, Jessica from Mayo Clinic here. Per a suggestion from Spintendo, I am creating a new request with my amended language to update the article. I request adding the below prose to the very end of the "Contributions to medicine and science" subsection of the "History" in the order I have presented them (in order to maintain chronology and keep with Wikipedia standards). I think these additions each are appropriate for the "Contributions to medicine and science" subsection and provide more information and context to that section:

In 2018, Mayo Clinic and UCLA used spinal cord stimulation and physical therapy that resulted in a man paralyzed since 2013 regaining the ability to stand and walk with assistance. The results were published in the journal Nature Medicine.[1]

Mayo Clinic's Advanced Care at Home Model of Care launched in 2020 and assists with patient housing.[2]

In 2020, Mayo Clinic launched the federally sponsored Expanded Access Program for Convalescent Plasma for hospitalized patients with COVID-19 in the United States.[3]

In 2022, Mayo Clinic Phoenix performed the most transplants out of anywhere in the United States.[4]

As of 2023, Mayo Clinic treated over 6,000 patients with proton beam therapy and an additional 4,000 patients at a second facility.[5]

References

  1. ^ Eileen, Drage O'Reilly. "Paralyzed man able to walk with assistance in clinical trial". Axios. Retrieved 29 September 2023.
  2. ^ Smits, Garry. "Coronavirus: Mayo Clinic launches advanced care at home in July". The Florida Times-Union. Retrieved 29 September 2023.
  3. ^ Treisman, Rachel (23 August 2020). "FDA Authorizes Convalescent Plasma As Emergency Treatment For COVID-19". NPR. Retrieved 7 September 2023.
  4. ^ Bennett, Stephanie (25 April 2023). "Groundbreaking transplants at Mayo Clinic help save people's lives: Here are their stories". FOX 10 Phoenix. Retrieved 6 September 2023.
  5. ^ Dené, Dryden (22 September 2023). "With expansion on the way, Mayo Clinic's proton beam therapy program aims to treat as many patients as possible". Rochester Post Bulletin. Archived from the original on 28 September 2023. Retrieved 29 September 2023.

I am happy to keep answering questions! JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 18:44, 8 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 9-DEC-2023[edit]

Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request.

Edit request review 9-DEC-2023

In 2018, Mayo Clinic and UCLA used spinal cord stimulation and physical therapy that resulted in a man paralyzed since 2013 regaining the ability to stand and walk with assistance. The results were published in the journal Nature Medicine.
no Declined.[note 1]


Mayo Clinic's Advanced Care at Home Model of Care launched in 2020 and assists with patient housing.
Clarification needed.[note 2]


In 2020, Mayo Clinic launched the federally sponsored Expanded Access Program for Convalescent Plasma for hospitalized patients with COVID-19 in the United States.
Clarification needed.[note 3]


In 2022, Mayo Clinic Phoenix performed the most transplants out of anywhere in the United States.
no Declined.[note 4]


As of 2023, Mayo Clinic treated over 6,000 patients with proton beam therapy and an additional 4,000 patients at a second facility
no Declined.[note 5]


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  1. ^ The facts surrounding the individual mentioned in this portion of the edit request, specifically the regaining of his abilities to stand and walk with assistance, are attenuated by the additional information that this ability encompassed no more than 111 yards, for no longer than 16 minutes, and was instantly lost once the artificial electrical stimulation ceased. Describing only half of this story might be a disservice to readers, who could conceivably be misled into drawing conclusions which are not necessarily present.
  2. ^ It is unclear what is meant by the phrase "assists with patient housing".
  3. ^ If this program were federally sponsored, it's not clear how Mayo "launched" it. Is it that the federal government "employed" Mayo (for lack of a better term) to carry out this program? The text leaves out the origins of, and impetus for, the program. Simply put, whose idea was this program? By describing Mayo as the "launcher", this could imply a sense of ownership of the idea for the program which might in actuality be more nuanced.
  4. ^ This claim is vague (i.e., transplants of what? Were these all successful transplants? 'The most' compared to any other facility, or 'more than' all other facilities combined? etc.)
  5. ^ As of 2023, only 2% of patients who receive radiation treatments obtain those treatments as proton beam therapy. The way this is described in the proposed text (with the only figures given as "10,000 patients") might be deficient in explaining the true extensiveness of this treatment.

Regards,  Spintendo  09:14, 9 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Revised edit request with provided clarifications[edit]

Thanks Spintendo for reviewing these requests individually. For the two paragraphs you had questions about, I have some alternative language for you to consider:

Mayo Clinic's Advanced Care at Home Model of Care launched in 2020 and assists patients in their own homes through virtual care.[1]
In 2020, Mayo Clinic began running a federally sponsored Expanded Access Program for Convalescent Plasma to treat hospitalized patients with COVID-19 in the United States.[2]

References

  1. ^ Smits, Garry. "Coronavirus: Mayo Clinic launches advanced care at home in July". The Florida Times-Union. Retrieved 29 September 2023.
  2. ^ Treisman, Rachel (23 August 2020). "FDA Authorizes Convalescent Plasma As Emergency Treatment For COVID-19". NPR. Retrieved 7 September 2023.

Thanks JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 16:55, 15 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Approved Thank you for clarifying these, it's much appreciated. I've implemented both into the Contributions section as requested. Regards,  Spintendo  00:49, 19 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Updated requests for previously declined content[edit]

Thanks for implementing two of the requested updates above, Spintendo. I had the opportunity to look at two of the requested updates you previously declined, and wanted to offer some amended language for those given your feedback. Will you consider these additions for the "Contributions to medicine and science" subsection? They can be placed chronologically if you agree.

In 2018, Mayo Clinic and UCLA used spinal cord stimulation and physical therapy that resulted in a man paralyzed since 2013 briefly regaining the ability to stand and walk with assistance. The patient was able to walk 111 yards for a total of 16 minutes when given artificial electrical stimulation. The results were published in the journal Nature Medicine.[1]
As of 2023, Mayo Clinic had treated more than 10,000 patients with proton beam therapy across two of its facilities. According to Post-Bulletin reporting, proton beam therapy is limited in the U.S., with only 2 percent of radiation patients being treated with the technology.[2]

References

  1. ^ Eileen, Drage O'Reilly. "Paralyzed man able to walk with assistance in clinical trial". Axios. Retrieved 29 September 2023.
  2. ^ Dené, Dryden (22 September 2023). "With expansion on the way, Mayo Clinic's proton beam therapy program aims to treat as many patients as possible". Rochester Post Bulletin. Archived from the original on 28 September 2023. Retrieved 29 September 2023.

Thanks JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 21:41, 21 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

 Partly done I've added the information concerning the UCLA electrical stimulation therapy, thank you for clarifying its wording — it's much appreciated. With regards to the beam therapy, this would be acceptable if a companion Wikilink on the therapy could be included in the prose. Not being familiar with this therapy myself, if you could locate which Wkipedia article would work best as a link for that term, that would be helpful. Please advise when ready, by switching the request parameter from |ans=y to |ans=n. Thank you! Regards,  Spintendo  02:30, 23 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Spintendo, thanks for the feedback. Here is the amended request:
As of 2023, Mayo Clinic had treated more than 10,000 patients with proton beam therapy across two of its facilities. According to Post-Bulletin reporting, proton beam therapy is limited in the U.S., with only 2 percent of radiation patients being treated with the technology.[1]

References

  1. ^ Dené, Dryden (22 September 2023). "With expansion on the way, Mayo Clinic's proton beam therapy program aims to treat as many patients as possible". Rochester Post Bulletin. Archived from the original on 28 September 2023. Retrieved 29 September 2023.
Thanks for the review JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 17:45, 3 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
 Done WhinyTheYounger ※ Talk 02:13, 11 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Innovation section[edit]

Hello I would like to make a new suggestion for this article to the Innovation section:

  • Add to the beginning of the section:
    • Mayo Clinic leads hundreds of clinical trials and offers therapies such as CAR-T and proton therapies. They are currently one of the leading research centers for the COVID-19 epidemic and were one of the first institutions offering plasma exchange for this patient population. During the COVID-19 pandemic, Mayo Clinic developed and adopted treatments that reduced mortality rates and patients with COVID-19 who received care at Mayo Clinic had a lower mortality rate than at other hospitals.[1] Mayo Clinic cofounded the national COVID-19 Health Care Coalition, a private industry effort to respond to the COVID-19 outbreak.[2] During 2021, the clinic cared for more than 160,000 COVID-19 patients and tested more than 1.1 million people. It also administered more than 500,000 COVID-19 vaccines and provided more than 19,000 monoclonal antibody infusions.[3] Mayo Clinic Laboratories developed highly accurate diagnostic and antibody tests, performing more than 3.1 million COVID-19 tests for patients nationwide. Fourteen new COVID-19-related tests were launched, and more than 100 new tests of all types were provided to patients and clients in 60 countries.[4]
  • Add "In collaboration with real estate firm Delos Living, Mayo Clinic launched the Well Living Lab in September 2015. This research facility is designed to simulate real-world, non-hospital environments, allowing Mayo Clinic researchers to study the interaction between indoor spaces and human health.[5]"
  • Replace "The Mayo Clinic Center for Innovation was established in 2008. It has since worked on over 270 projects.[6]" with "The Mayo Clinic Center for Innovation, established in 2008, was one of the pioneers of innovation in healthcare. It has since worked on over 270 projects and is often considered a role model for using design in healthcare.[7]"
  • Add "The video content addresses important questions and answers and is designed to aid in the decision-making process between patient and doctor.[8]" following the sentence that says, "In March 2018, Mayo Clinic and Mytonomy, a healthcare education system company, partnered to provide video content for cancer patients."

References

  1. ^ CBS MINNESOTA (18 January 2021). "Mayo Clinic's COVID Treatments Result In Mortality Rate One-Third Of Than National Average - CBS Minnesota". www.cbsnews.com. Retrieved 6 September 2023.
  2. ^ Landi, Heather (March 25, 2020). "Mayo Clinic, Amazon, others launch collaboration to increase COVID-19 testing, vaccine development". Retrieved 6 September 2023.
  3. ^ Tribune, Christopher Snowbeck Star. "Mayo Clinic's operating income soared to $1.2B last year". Star Tribune. Retrieved 6 September 2023. The clinic cared for more than 160,000 patients with COVID-19 during 2021 and tested more than 1.1 million people for the virus. Mayo staff administered more than 500,000 COVID-19 vaccines and more than 19,000 infusions of monoclonal antibodies to treat the disease.
  4. ^ Furst, Jay (26 February 2021). "Meeting the Challenges of a History Year 2020 Mayo Clinic Performance Highlights". Mayo Clinic News Network. Retrieved 28 September 2023.
  5. ^ Cite error: The named reference Stinson was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  6. ^ "Mayo Clinic CFI". Retrieved August 4, 2016.
  7. ^ "Mayo Clinic CFI". Retrieved August 4, 2016.
  8. ^ "Mayo Clinic partners with cloud startup Mytonomy to give cancer patients critical data". Healthcare IT News. 2018-03-22. Retrieved 2018-03-23.

Please let me know what you think, thanks. JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 13:06, 18 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Note: The full formatting for reference "ref name="Stinson"" does not appear above because it is in the live article already.[1] JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 14:28, 23 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Stinson, Liz (October 4, 2015). "Why the Mayo Clinic Modeled Its New Lab on a Stuffy Office". Wired. Retrieved October 9, 2015.
 Not done for now: Some of the requested changes are currently written in a promotional tone. Please review WP:Neutral point of view and make changes where appropriate to follow this before reopening the request. Zippybonzo | talk | contribs (they/them) 20:31, 25 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Article structure[edit]

Hello, I wanted to propose some content rearrangement to this article in order to streamline it and make it a bit more readable. I work at Mayo Clinic and have a conflict of interest, which is why I'm seeking consensus here on the Talk page.

  • Change the heading of "Corporate affairs" to "Operations" and then remove the heading named "Core operations"
    • It seems a bit redundant to have all these different headings that mean similar things while also having no prose directly under "Core operations" (instead it moves right into subsections)
  • Place the three subsections of "Clinical practice" "Research" and "Education" under the new "Operations" section heading

I think this would help the overall flow of the page. Let me know if there are any questions. JVAtMayoClinic (talk) 17:02, 24 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@JVAtMayoClinic. Done Cinematic Poetry (talk) 09:47, 6 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

High cholesterol treatments[edit]

Treatment 2603:8001:1900:B78:BCE8:54C:D656:ADFC (talk) 17:54, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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