Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Bloodletting/archive1
Bloodletting[edit]
Self-nomination. Was previously a good article and a good subsection of bleeding; with the latter merged into the former, I feel that this is now worthy of featured status. -Sean Curtin 06:10, 5 Aug 2004 (UTC)
Object - Its a good article but the writing is a little anaemic ;-) Sorry, a more serious objection is that some section headings would be a good idea (most obviously for the bit on modern usage, but an earlier section would be a good idea too). Also I would have thought there was a connection to trepanning to be made. -- Solipsist 13:23, 5 Aug 2004 (UTC)- It's a bit turgid. Couldn't it be broken up a bit with sections, images, etc.? — Chameleon Main/Talk/Images 23:52, 5 Aug 2004 (UTC)
- I've split the article into sections and added another image, as well as external links and a little more info. Any specific objections on the style, or other objections? -Sean Curtin 07:36, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)
- Looks good to me. — Chameleon Main/Talk/Images 12:09, 7 Aug 2004 (UTC)
- Great! -Sean Curtin 23:22, 7 Aug 2004 (UTC)
- Looks good to me. — Chameleon Main/Talk/Images 12:09, 7 Aug 2004 (UTC)
- I've split the article into sections and added another image, as well as external links and a little more info. Any specific objections on the style, or other objections? -Sean Curtin 07:36, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)