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Bolt Thrower

I'd appreciate comments and constructive criticism. Esp on the biography section. Spearhead 16:05, 1 Jan 2005 (UTC)

I've only given it a cursory glance, but the lead section needs to be at least a paragraph long. - Ta bu shi da yu 03:25, 25 Jan 2005 (UTC)

I have done a large copyedit, expanded the lead section to make it more interesting and shifted one of the images to a more appropriate place. - Ta bu shi da yu 07:41, 30 Jan 2005 (UTC)