Wikipedia:Peer review/Six Flags Over Texas/archive1

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Six Flags Over Texas[edit]

Just need another set of eyes to look over the article for clarity and errors. --BrandonR 04:33, Sep 27, 2004 (UTC) Tightened up text. Question....in one paragraph you mention that the engines were converted to oil and in the next paragraph you mention that they park kept the integrity of the steam engines. Which is it?

The engines were converted from wood to oil, but were still steam engines. The oil heated the boilers instead of wood heating the boilers. I fixed that part. Still could use a look. I added an interesting fact under "free publicity" section, that would not be apparent if you had not watched the park being built. good article by the way.Pedant 01:41, 2004 Oct 26 (UTC)